Reviews for In front of us
XxXSeraph12XxX chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I almost died here xDD Awww~ It was soooooo nice! I'll reread this in the future when I ran out of SyncArietta to read / and I think I regretted of reading this too soon Dx I love the idea how you made Sync act Arietta's Ion for a night wew xDDD she's so intense pfff taking advantage of the 'dream excuse' bwahahaha Aw~ so cute! Why does she have to diiieee on the game D8 wahhh TTTT
Mattricole chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Great story, a bit sad, but it was great! I too, believed that Ion was a girl.
Fon-Master Ion chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
this was so sad TTTT poor sync. nice story ~
Singer-of-the-Abyss chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Geez that's so sad! T_T I want more! More I tell you more! They need more Arietta/Sync stories. This is one of my faves. noble and Arietta...Why did you have to fight Anise? Why? You should write a lemon with Arietta and Sync. I've only read one lemon of them and it was very very light lemon! LEMON! XD

Great Job!
lala.arietta chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
yeah. the 1st tym isaw ion i thought he was a girl.

and damn, his voice is high-pitched. sigh.

poor arietta..):

poor sync.. Dx
kitten1596 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
aww this is so sad and cute
Suiten-Aker chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
_ so sad... T-T poor arietta why she has to die...
Wheel0fDawn chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
i might write a story where arietta doesnt die, but barly survives her fight, then when she finds out that it was mohs who did it, she runs off to mt roneal and has alot of bad luck there, then my OC comes in ]
TitanNegro chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Tadinho deles...T.T
CPO-AE chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aw! So Kawaii! Loved it Cute and sweet...Love Ion lots...Miss him...*Sighs helplessly* But...Him and Anise made a good pairing hehe...I love Sync and Arietta! There so cute together! Good Fanfic, very touching and cute
DarkSabor chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
aw its awesome~!

Sync is a awesome Character!

Arietta is so cool too! Sometimes I wish I could play as those 2 characters you know? lol Awesome story, please continue it :D

aw darn she...died ._.
Culinaromancer chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I like that couple. It is a really good story you wrote about it. I hope you write more about AriettaxSync stuff.
Mentor Donatello chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
You had a few issues with verb tense here and there, and there was the occasional word omission, but it was all stuff that Spell Check or Grammar Check could handle.

I disliked the use of capitalization for lines that were shouted. It reminded me distinctly of the way people type on instant messengers when they're angry. Simply adding that the person shouted the line in question would be sufficient, I believe.

You characterized Sync rather well, I thought. His aloofness and denial were very believable, as well as his short fuse. It's somewhat cute how Largo picked on him. (I thought that Largo seemed somewhat fatherly towards the younger God Generals from time to time, myself.) The description of "Ion" was fairly accurate.

Aside from my minor gripes, it was a nice piece of work.

Good luck!
iRishou chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Death Skater chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
:D I liked it. Although some of the extra punctuation is grammatically incorrect, I don't think it's something worth flipping out about. I thought it was very sweet (in a mysteriously) how Sync decides to be Ion for that one night, so he could be with Arietta, even if she didn't realize it. I love it when Sync takes advantage of his mock voice of Ion. It's so... sadistically cool...? lul.

If it was lemon, psh, I'd still read it anyway. ;D Good job.
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