|Reviews for Back To The Future 4: Meat my Granddaughter|
| Dragons Ark chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Ok, Sue. Sue. Sue.
First of all, you need to correct your spelling. You should have some sort of spell checker in your comp...
Also, I just can't take you seriously with that name. I mean, crustal-beast onix scorpion? Really?
This has potential, but the story needs work.
| Loopy for Lupin chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
Pretty good so far!
| bttf4444 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
This is a great chapter. I wonder if Maria will decide to take Makito back with her.
| Abandoned Account 4815162342 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
| Abandoned Account 4815162342 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
There are some grammar and spelling errors, but so far I like your story.
| bttf4444 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
It's a very interesting premise, but there are quite a few spelling mistakes that need to be corrected - including in the summary.
Otherwise, it is very intriguing. I'd prefer for Doc to bring Clara and the boys back to 1985 with him, but that's just my opinion. I do wonder what happened to them, though.