|Reviews for The Time that was Lost|
| lokimademedoit chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I really enjoyed this story, you have a talent for description that makes it easy to picture (as a reader) what is happening. I know you wrote this some time ago and it's marked complete but I could see a few points that could be continued and would love to read more.
The only little thing I spotted (apart from a couple of really minor spelling errors) that I think isn't right is that you referred to the 'solar barque of my brother, Horus...' and if this is Set's point of view then Horus would be his nephew/brothers son.
Anyway as I said, I really liked this - I could just see Apep baring its fangs and Set responding just the same! I'm off now to read more of your stuff, thanks.