Reviews for Before I Wake
serenbach chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I loved the opening line to this story, it was so simple and yet so sad. I loved how you told the story with flashbacks as well. Loved it! :)
Sienna03 chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Wonderful and terrible. The last lines of each scene really did me in. Great drabble; not a word wasted.
AshmandaLC chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
this was good! :runs off to find more KH yuffentine:
lynn.reist chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Instant favorite. I love unhappy endings. This was so true to both of them; excellent work.
Iseki chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I really love this... angry, distraught, open-ended. the line "What sick heart - or lack thereof - had let her slip through that darkness, survive, and come here?" just sums up the feeling that we love to torture ourselves with when contemplating the Yuffentine/KH angle completely.
C2ii chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
I love yuffentine and it has so much potential here in the kh section I really don't get why theres so little. I can see Yuffie thinking about destiny and fate! ( loved the Cloud part thats probably why all the girl joined him in the first place )