i love this story. it is really good and very funny.

Hmm interesting idea. I wounder if the Snake Faced Pedo will turn evil or not :o.

Lol any way so far just toff the first chapter this looks like a good read maybe t will help give me idea's for the fanfc i am currently writing.

kano sounded odly southern :D

good

"Natas"? Really? You couldn't have pulled one of the boss characters from MK to serve?

That's just pathetic.

interesting! plz keep me updated..

Hey ure comment about randomly thinking about this while playing halo 3 reminded me of an idea i thoufht of,

What if when naruto and jiraiya came back from the trip and find konoha in ruins,

Thought of this listening to boulevard of broken dreams

Hello I really enjoyed the story tough the rape/ imply of rape I did not enjoy you could have warn us head of time.

other then that I loved it, it wasn't boreing it keep me on my toes and it got rid of sasuke and sakrua so in my books you are doing great so far, the best part is that naurto has a faimly and you did something i haven't seen done in a many fanfics mabye 1 I seen and that is to take naurto out of that stuiped village and honestly I hope that village gets what it desirves.

other then that I just plan enjoy the easy reading and the fact that you did something no fanfic ever did accept for one that I read and that was not only make the snake sannin a good guy but he gets along with the others perfectly and they raised naruto wonderfully.

and and all I can't wait for the sequal and when it comes I will read it too no end.

Keep up the great work!

This was good!

Forbidden kingdom: a five out of five in my book. Great chose of chericter

Awesome story so far

awesome

Welcome... to Mortal Kombat!

lol squee. great story man keep it up.

Smells to me like something ust hit the fan.