Reviews for The Littlest Sannin
scione chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
you could all ways cut the time then have flashbacks when needed hope it's a naruto/anko pairing.
VZizzle chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
i think you should just cut to the chase and gradualy show his gained powers as time continues and he battles stronger and stronger oponents

this is good i havent read a story were hes raised by all 3 sannin keep it going

-later
chinoodin chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
*reads chapter* Good, good, Loving it!.

Never seen this concept of three sanins raisng Naruto!

Wonder how you will deal with the chunin exams?
Spear-of-the-doomed chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
I was thinking you may want to have it to where their are two teams. One Anko's age and one Naruto age because of the age difference the time to start their training would be different. It would also be smart to have Jiraiya learn of the Akatsuki by him investagating the Kyuubi attack. Juugo is another one you must address because he looked to Orochimaru for help and in turn he was able to make the curse seal from his finding. You may want to add an enemy that is the same as Orochimaru in terms of evil (think about the can of worms he opened with the attack).
KunochiDreamer chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Interesting fic. ")")")
Eovin chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Great!Orochi is so nice here,and Jiraiya being so romantic is cute.
Darksnider05 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
That could be possibly the worlds most screwed up kid ever or not who knows...
Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I say cut to the return to Konoha, use flashbacks to show anything you really want to show about the growing up years. I hope this fic will go NaruHina, you write it so well but we haven't seen much of it in Konoha Exiles due to them being apart and the war...
Zaara the black chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
This is something i never expectted to happen. Naruto raied by the Lendary 3. Man this is killer.
Xeno Major chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Hmm, like I said in The Prince of Thieves, Kakashi being a idiot who keeps judging books b their covers is not good. You could keep him around as the idiot who keeps attacking Naruto, and who keeps getting his ass handed to him by the Sannin, or you could kill him off. I would like to see the former, but it's your decision what happens in this little world.
Egghead chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Nice. Update soon
Kael Hyun chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I say a time skip like at 6 years but keep his personalaty trates the same Head strong, unwillingness to give up, and Strangth to servive
Dornkorn chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
i would do a time skip until he starts training and skip around on that for the next chapter and this i hope will be intersting
Demonikai chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
i think you could make the years of what he learns. As time grows switch to his mindset but thats me
UNC2 chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Awesome concept, all three Sannin at once. Thats never been done before.I'm guessing that Orochimaru will be good in this story, but will Orochimaru still create the curse seal? And if he does will Naruto get one? What about summons? And will Naruto hate the village?
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