Reviews for My Views
paper.creations chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
I LOVE the family part at the end! It was gorgeous; a wonderful look at Breaking Dawn.

I loved all four poems, they were wonderfully written and just so...gorgeous! Geez, I'm not very eloquent tonight, but I really enjoyed reading them!


paper.creations chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Awe! I liked it! I really liked "Among the stars together there,

Eternally there". It's so cute!

I really liked it, and the Haiku formatting is very pretty.

On to the next!

paper.creations chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
I disliked Breaking Dawn, but this was so pretty! Your poetry is gorgeous. This line really caught my eye: "My sun finds his destiny, his happiness".

Loved it!

paper.creations chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
That was gorgeous! You put the first three books of Twilight into poetry beautifully.


Off to the next poem! I'm excited!

Loved it,

somefarmgirl chapter 4 . 11/28/2008
YAY You're back!

Anyway I accually liked that poem.
Everintruiged chapter 2 . 10/14/2008
Loved it! I always loved writing poems myself... but never thought I had the talent to do it... haha

I'll just stick with writing stories for now... haha
Everintruiged chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
I liked it a lot, there was a lot of raw feeling in there.

I also liked the eclipse and the sun and the moon metaphor... defintitely full of meaning!
Masochisim chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
That was really good! And it made me consider some not so...good things about Breaking Dawn...again.

Masochisim chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Wow. That has to be the best interpretation of the Twilight Series that I have seen put into poetry.

emmjae chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
Maybe I'm eternally dense or maybe...

Well, truly I'm still betting on the eternally dense part but anyway...

It took me reading both poems and then just sitting here with my laptop for a few minutes to realize that the sun Bella was fighting away was Jacob and the eclipse was Edward..


Or, if that's not what it's supposed to be (which I really hope it is since I just wrote a whole review for that reason!) that's what it felt like to me...

Wow. Some days I feel like my brain is moving in slow motion.

Maybe it's got something to do with vegetarian brains...

Who knows? Not me, not you.

Anyway...that was an uttely pointless message that just wasted a chunk of your life...




Emmjae :)
somefarmgirl chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
That was a Good poem! Any chance your gunna update on Ignorance is a bliss?...

Muggle-Born-Witch and Proud chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
DANG GIRL! That was good, it makes mine look like mediocre. That was flippin awesome!