Reviews for Melanin
regenerate chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
oh wow.

hard core laughing right hurr.

'He didn’t mean it in that whole stupid-socially-and-romantically-retarded-Sasuke-who-loves-Sakura sort of way—not that kind of annoying. Hells no! He meant in the whole oh-my-god-will-you-just-shut-the-hell-up-now-before-I-slit-my-own-throat sort of annoying.'

gosh, you kinda spew it out

lyke crazy, dood.

i heart it.

i really do.

i love crack, it's mind-defying,

very pretty, very unique-feelgood-

just kidding, srsly.

Lol. This is awesome.

And this is why I read your stuff.

Go beyond the norm, man.

Madam Grey chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Lol, this fic is so great xD I loved Naruto's inner turmoil and the idea of him liking girls like his mother ;) on some level... it was cute that he was so annoyed xD and then took a 180 degree turn. Hehe, thanks for sating my NaruKa craving D
yellowbead chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
this account is dead sorry chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
I would prefer this pairing over sasukarin anyday D

Naruto and his secret fetish for red heads, we all should've known.
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Heh. (I love these crack couples...)


I love the whole Karin/Naruto idea. Where did you get it from? So...random.

But nice. Very nice. And yet again, you capture Naruto's character...beause it is just like Naruto to get annoyed by the one he has fallen for ( the heat of battle too. VERY like Naruto.)


Probably because she's very similar to him anyways...


*sigh* FFN has not as yet fixed itself. (Why must they take away all the good things?)
InsomniacNarutoReader chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
haha...i didn't think anyone would ever write a narukarin story its so completely random but you make it so good
The Loser Lord chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Pink is a shade of red, huh?

I agree. Only cuz in kindergarten, kids were too cheap to use actual pink crayons. Just red.

Naruto and Karin? Unheard of. Haha. Way to think outside the box :]
WhatDoYouMeanI'mDrunk chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
hope this might be more than a one-shot!
Tatacolt chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
It's kinda cool... surprisingly, never considered such a pairing. The observation on men/fathers and women/mothers aspect is cute. Thanks
LouisaMB chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Strange...NaruKarin..Never ever read one of those before. My grin couldn't get any bigger.:D
Affinitive chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This was amazing. Definitely not what I expected, but all the more enjoyable.
Annie Sparklecakes chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
OH MY GOD YOU WROTE IT. Already. Instead of updating.

You're a LOSER.

Dude. I don't even know. This pairing disturbs me somehow, but the story was so Naruto, I loved it. So good job. D
Sony89 chapter 1 . 4/2/2008


But the fic is good :)
MiKe2vIcIoUs chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
eh, makes sense. I heard that before but I refuse to believe it. My mom annoys the shits out of me... And if it's true, and I'm attracted to women like my mother, I'll be in the same boat as Naruto. Attracted to loud, annoying, and overly emotional women with red hair. I swear on the Dallas Cowboys, I'm going to try my best to stay out of that ocean.

But anyway, great stuff. Gave me a chuckle, and a new way to look at things.
Alindahaw chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
cute. different. love it. XD
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