|Reviews for Melanin|
| AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
i thought it was pretty plotless,
but very amusing, [:
| Luny Ravings of THE Mad Hatter chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
HAHAHA reminds me of the Oedipus Complex by Freud. n tho i HATE Karin, it made me laugh. I suppose this is when I concede defeat and say, yes I do like it.
| does chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
ahahah XD I can totally see Naruto attracted to someone like Karin/his mother. she's, after all, an almost (but not really) sakura (part one) clone.
| PNT chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
BEST. PAIRING. EVAR.
I believe that is all.
| GenMcvile chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
HAHAHA THAT WAS GOOD
| MintiNeko chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Yes Naruto, it is in your blood. You will forever be at least physically attracted to loud redheads.
Very few people write about Hebi from Naruto's point of view, so this was a good change.
| Spazztasticle chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
xD Very non conventional, I have never seen a naruka story xD But Its really cute
| accented chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I've never been a fan of Karin, or paid much attention to her, but this was brilliant.
Naruto's like the epitome of a guy, all, "Maybe, kinda, ok fine, a lot." that kinda thing. And I just wanna squish him.
This was amazing.