|Reviews for How to Put the Bun in the Oven|
| CrAzY-SiLLy-Me chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
LOL. Who would've thought that Sasuke would be using pick-up lines to get Sakura? XD I love the eyes line, as well as the part where he forgot his pick up line since he said she was beautiful. XD
| totallyloud chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
I really liked this one! So cute and really really awesome!
just great! :) hohoh keep up the good work! XD and do many more of these SasuSaku! Yey!
| Caramel Crazy chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I absolutely loved it! Can't. Wait. For. The. Next. One. Update soon, please!
| yumerin chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
He actually dreamed about it, hehe *yume writes down something about little pink-haired Uchihas. Oh, wouldn't *that* be interesting?*
| Serena of the Moon chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
lol, how cute.
Can't wait to read the next one.
Update soon please!
| nazzy and jerkez chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
You, my love-
is about to start a career as publisher of SasuSaku stories!
Now, where's all the photographers I ordered?
| Odat chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
quite a few of these got me giggling fairly hard. I love number 21. That was excellent! Hahahahaha. Can't wait for the next set!
| Bloodropiris chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
I like it! Please Continue it!
| Withdrawn chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Wow... this is really nice, I have to admit that it's pretty cute to see Sasuke in the position Sakura was once in, not to mention all the hilarious pick-up lines... No matter how much epic fail one pick-up line may encompass, that only ever makes it funnier for it's complete stupidity. Of course, no self-respecting male would ever seriously use a pick up line (notice I do say self-respecting... and seriously. Now jokingly... let's just say that my dad has a funny sense of humor, and I'm stunned my step-mom finds it comedic instead of just plain insane). Other than that, everyone's gotta love it when Inner Sakura orders Outer Sakura to jump Sasuke... it's always just far too perfect and awesome. In the end, this is awesome.
| xBlu3-Appl3x chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
LMAO. Luffed it!
“That shirt’s very becoming of you. If I were on you, I’d be coming too.”
LMFAO. That's very dirty yet HILARIOUS! I'm still laughing about it. If Sasuke ever said that to me, I'd probably be stunned silent. But since it's Sakura and not me, (it tears me up inside -sniff-) I can laugh hysterically. SO LMAO. :P
Update Part 2 Soon! :)
| dark Alley chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Ha! This is so funny! Can't wait for more!
| ihearttoast09 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Love it! And Sasuke is DEFINANTLY the Sakura here! XD
| Rationalized Insanity chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Oh, god, you did not just go there! Sasuke... and stupid pick up lines. No, just... no. And how the hell does he know about Romeo? Sasuke reading Shakespeare? Oh Sasuke, I don't know you anymore... but it's becoming increasingly clear that you are gonna be totally whipped. (grins) Mwatwafuafua! Hopes to see next chappie as good as this was.
R. Insanity (Insane? Why, yes. But you don't know the half of it!)
| biancaBOMB chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
ohh kami . be a dear &update for me . XD
ROFL ; just do it . NIKE . XD
yeah . your awesome .
| AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
And all those little paragraphs coming together to become a story...
That must have been hard. First thinking of a story, then choosing the prompts order and what to write for each one...
And yet, you pulled it off. And made it funny. And cute.
(The last one, Quitting? It summurized the entire page.)
It's priceless, having Sasuke chase Sakura and having her punch him because of his...pick-up lines. (What ever happened to his intellect? Disappear like my classmates?)
Good job (and in case you worry about getting a swelled head, here is a needle.)!
Happy international day for landmine awareness! (I know random things).
and as you might be american (not like me), Happy National Walk to Work Day!