Reviews for How to Put the Bun in the Oven
Obscure Serenity chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
o this was cute .

the formatting or whatever with the numbers ?

thats what you would call originality .

I liked it very much (:

so I'm guessing it's a twoshot ?
A Recreant's Quiddity chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Ahaha! Cool!
AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
i think.


oh the horror.

; hahaha.

but that was pretty amusing.

keep it up!

i'd like to read part 2.


Luny Ravings of THE Mad Hatter chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
that's really sweet, but instead of only fluff you do have the angst thing in. Number 7 and 8 is my favourite.
Bloody Strawberry chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
hahahahahaha i love pick up lines hahahahahaha and my cousin has a booklet about silly pick up lines to get a womans attention which he frequently used honestly it was so funny to see him say it to random girls hahahahaha
a thousand cranes chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
"Sorry. You're so beautiful you made me forget my pick up line." After all those completely crude and stupid, but still completely awesome pick up lines, that was just genius.
theLilyLady chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Haha, Quiet made me laugh so hard! HA, you've made him one clever smartass. Hahaha, I'm still laughing!
nothing but blue chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
love this! it's cute. must be hard though. great job! :D keep it up. please update soon!
Machlatte chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
It was cute. GLORIOUS pick-up lines as well.
Spazztasticle chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Oh, yay drabbles! :D
Spazzeh-chan chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Yay! First review!
minivanx chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
“That shirt’s very becoming of you. If I were on you, I’d be coming too.”


i dont know whether to laugh at his pick up lines or smack him for the corny-ness of them all. ahaha

but that was hilarious. -
BuBBly CaNis luPus chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Laugh my ass off material. Seriously, where did you get all these pick up lines? Can't wait for the next chappie!
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