|Reviews for Infractus Mens, Convulsus Monumentum|
| Jikol chapter 3 . 11/24
yoniko is that type of character that most people hate, but I like that! every story has to have a character that annoys the heck out of them...
| FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
I barfed when the yaoi part came, but everything else was okay! I love this story, whenever I read it, I will just skip "those parts" and it will be like the best story ever! YAAAAY and I love how Ace and Shanks fought over Luffy, don't we all wuv him, and wanna give him hugs?
| NeverGonnaDie chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Wow this story has a great plot! I really like the idea of making luffy smarter and him hiding the fact underneath a mask. It's cool! Too bad I'm not a fan of yaio( like at all) I probably would have totally loved the story!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 8 . 12/12/2013
NOOOO! I THOUGHT SHE GET KILLED!
WHY SHE STILL ALIVE...? ! ! !
I'm glad...! :D
I'm glad it's Happy Ending...!
So Zoro and Luffy already Having secret relationship before, huh...!
Ace and Shanks was fast catching when they saw One of the Previous Memories that can be look normal...! ;D
I'm Happy for them...!
But i'm not happy that the evil girl still alive...!
| Amyand chapter 8 . 9/1/2013
What a really really really great story!
I love it so much! You totally awesome!
I couldnt stop read it from the first chapter until the end..totally great story!
And teah, like many many other readers, i wish you can make a sequel for this..it'll be wonderful..
And, i directly pushed favorite stoey, suthor, and follow you..hahaha..
The best fanfic i've ever read this far..
| roxie 49 chapter 8 . 8/22/2013
loved the story. ;)
| LostFairyMantic chapter 8 . 7/7/2013
This's an absolutely briliiant story! :3
| scryoko chapter 8 . 6/5/2013
This is so good... :)
| The Stargazing Shadow chapter 8 . 5/18/2013
Wow. Amazing! Will you make a sequel?
I mean, after what Yoniko did, I wanted to see her doing her revenge.
| McCormick Girl chapter 8 . 2/22/2013
That was amazing, ugh yoniko was a bitch i just want to punch her. I liked your idea, this story was a masterpiece, i loved it!
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/1/2013
I loved it! It was really sweet with all the memory's
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Kill her! Chop her hands off! Misery, pain, suffering! That damn OC! Burn her, Ace! Do everything horrible in One Piece to her!
| GlOmP3R chapter 8 . 12/9/2012
Wow! Awesome story - tears were shed, it was lovley(: super emotinal, and how could his mother do such horrible things?! Anyways I realy loved it, awesome job
| pikachu2510 chapter 8 . 11/8/2012
OMG Yoniko! i juss wanna kick her butt / i dont like her . i thought that it would end w/ a happy ending, where Luffy would 4give Yoniko then she would become a friend buh this omg i juss wanna punch her , 4 some reason this ending gives me a feelin that this story is gonna have a sequel o.O.. well the story was great! though i wish u showed Luffy more... wonderful job! im a fan of ur writing now :D
| Lynx D'Yaoi chapter 8 . 11/3/2012
This is the Most AMAZING One Piece fanfic that I've ever read so far.. I Love Ur idea of fourth kind of Devil Fruits & this memory 'travelling' to Luffy's.. It's GENIUS.. My fav parts are when they come across the grey & black doors.. The part when Luffy's own mother hurt him and the memory of the death of his nakama was saddened me the most (I actually cried).. Lastly, do U plan of making a sequel?.. Coz I would Love to see Yoniko aka Bitch died a horrible death.. Great Job & Keep Up the Good Work.. Love U