Reviews for Blood Lust
vv672002 chapter 9 . 3/14/2013
Please Continue!
Zandra97 chapter 9 . 7/17/2012
Iloved this whole story and cant wait to read the next!
Alexzander95 chapter 9 . 10/21/2011
Not bad but need improvement. I liked most of it I didn't even mind the yaoi with Sasuke and Naruto and them dieing. What I didnt like was Hinata dieing, it seemed to cold to me. You didn't portray her to be bitch you made her really likeable and then you killed her making the reader hate the vampires when before they liked them. I'm not sure if you meant to make the vampires seem truly evil but with killing Hinata it makes the reader suddenly dislike the vampires which the story is centered around which causes them to dislike the story. Thats my opinion anyways.
Hunter chapter 9 . 6/22/2011
Good story.I liked the epilogue at the end i havent seen many people who have an actual wait to start reading the sequel.
Hunter chapter 5 . 6/22/2011
Wtf did ino give good chapter it never stops suprising me what alout of writers of due alout of this horror and vampire mythical creture stuff can thinck off good job
Hunter chapter 4 . 6/22/2011
good chapter i got a feeling you based it off vamipire heart or remade it whichever still a good writing so far
Hunter chapter 3 . 6/22/2011
Dude hiashi was a doosh in that chapter now i laughed at that "I messed up my words" clasic
Osiris Gainsborough chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
Vampire women. If that doesn't make you read this story, nothing will. :D This story fucking rocks out w/ its cock out.

~Your midian to Lucifer,

bleach number 1 fan chapter 9 . 5/4/2010
wow sutch a cool fic lol love the vampier ino lol just to cool :) cant w8t to read more of your work its realy good :)
Wild Geek 1987 chapter 9 . 12/24/2009
Hey great story. You don't like dear Hinata-chan do ya?

Good luck with everything.

yo chapter 2 . 9/24/2009
ok this mistake is starting to get a little annoying.

a sire is the vampire who did the changing of the underling.

i.e.: ino is the sire. tenten and temari are the underlings.

you keep refering to the two girls as her sire. that means they would have both changed ino..which isnt what youre going for.

why did you post two of the same story? even inos outfit in this is identical to the one in vampire heart
TheFluffyPurpleVampire chapter 9 . 1/24/2009
good series,

ur a master of awsome vamp stories :)
TheFluffyPurpleVampire chapter 7 . 1/24/2009
pretty cewl, one thing thou

u spelled gentle wrong, gentile means... well u dress fancy
Ayaka Naeuri chapter 8 . 12/11/2008
whyd ya kill hinata, eff u
TheSongWriter chapter 9 . 11/20/2008
LOL nice story, I love the plot, but i feel that it was a little rushed, but never the less, i read the whole thing in within 45 mins XD So I still consider it damn awesome. I normally read shiznat/naonat fanfics, if you know what that is :P But I read this one today, because the summary was intruiging ;) This is going into my favs _, and if you ever write a mai hime fanfic, let me know ] great job on this fic by the way. inosaku is way hot, and vampires just add to the hotness. Hinata shouldn't have died though TT I like her T/T
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