|Reviews for Feeling Randy|
| nihongoneko chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Wow. I didn't think JJ would get violent... It was funny how he found them though. I couldn't help but laugh. :)
| Akasha721 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
The story was kind of interesting...but you had a few grammer errors and spelling mistakes. You wrote JJ ignored Dee advances Shouldn't it be the other way around? Butt naked in the office where anyone can come in...I don't think Ryo would go for that.
However, this is your story...the concept was interesting though. You may want someone to read it over for you next time. I'm just saying...
| Kenshin-gotenks chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
overall I liked the idea. There was an overuse of the name 'Randy' and it did interupt the flow. The line 'drown further into the sinner’s paradise of sexual gratification' was absolutely amazing. But the ending did throw me off a little... It was a sweet moment, and the crazy maniac JJ was a little over the top, even for JJ. Other than that the storyline was very good. :)