Reviews for The Scream
inabsurd chapter 1 . 5/11
This is written so beautifully! I'm so sad about Raito's death tho, I thought he was going to be fine and then he wasn't and damnit, he and L deserved to fall in love properly and talk ablut it all-they deserved a chance :(
Sturnidae chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
this was absolutely beautiful
Seil Neddih chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
You...killed him. You killed Light-kun. I...don't know how to feel about that. I suppose he is free, now, finally, but he had a good thing going with L! And his paintings...Jesus, I think I'm actually really upset about this. It was interesting how you wrote it though, and I thought it was cool. still killed him! And left L all alone! Still thought this was awesome though, kudos to you.
CakexBandxLife chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
I just died inside... *goes to sob in corner*
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2015


I guess I sort of expected that, though. Poor L.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Omg this was really good I was like screaming no when light died
jyotimeena10 chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
wow. it was EPIC!
runqi chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Imagine in a way that is so very fragile, so very delicate.
Ne Quittez Pas chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
This was beautiful. Thank you.
LilyPhantomhive01 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I can't believe that ending ! Urgghhh! *throws things around* But it was SUCH a perfect ending! I really love Light Yagami, (before he turned into a psychotic teen with a messiah-complex) and of course I ship those two together. :) Thank you for that!
PurpleSong chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I would have liked the last part about after raitos death a little longer... I don't know why, but I simply love the part of the story where the "lover" to the main character is in despair because of something horrible happened to the main character... These parts always makes my stomach hard, heart hurt and sometimes I even cry... I know it's weird, but I can't help it... Anyway I really love your ffs, and your now officially one of my favourite authors! It's really interesting and amazing how the two stories reflect each other and fit so well together :3 and the idea of making death note into a mafia organisation... Genius. Keep up the good work, ganbatte sensei
ichiruzuka chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
...there's no freedom in death, you know.
K. B. Piper chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I absolutely loved this. The ending brought me to tears though, I was seriously not expecting him to die...of course Misa would come in and screw everything up, eh?
I'd give it a 10/10 3
snakeofdreams chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
AlexielvsAngel chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I LOVED LOVED LOVED it! The dark atmosphere, the words not spoken but implied, and of course the whole Light being a victim and an artist (I'm a big fan of fan-fictions with Light as a musician or painter or writer). Moreover to prove how much I loved it, I cried (when Light's painting L to the end). It was truly magnificent.

PS: I'm also not surprised at all that you're beta-ing "The black Lamb". It is also one of my favourite fan-fiction.

Looking forward of more of your Death Note fan-fiction.

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