I dont understand your fic. I mean, no offense really, it's just illogical. I know people on depression and anxiety, even in trauma. I'm one of them, but it's a little triggering when the breaking points are just too long.

Anyways, I'll still be reading.

I haven't read a story like this in so long. It grabbed my attention, it pulled at the heart-srrobgs, it frustrated me. It has so much in it and brought up so much to my mind and soul that I felt and struggle to deal with myself. I'm so glad I read this, thank you for sharing!

Very good story. For the vast majority it definitely doesn’t count as a romance, and even the last few chapters focus more on other issues. Very engrossing though!

Dear god this is so good and yet so sad. IK you put a trigger warning on the SA chapter but I'd put one on these as well. As a child loss mom it is so hard yet so commiseratory. It feels so good to read 3 years post event, and still I found myself sobbing in a moment PTSD. That means a great portrayal of this situation, but still extremely triggering.

thank you. for writing a beautifully real story. it hurt me and made me face parts of my past and then gave me hope that it will be better. thank you.

Omg! This is one of my favourite stories now! It was perfect - there was drama, angst (when it talked about Matthew's death I sobbed so hard I thought I'd never stop), romance, and even a sort of sarcastic humour! You've portrayed both Hermione and Draco perfectly, and I absolutely loved this fanfic. The chapters were long, the emotions perfectly captured... it was amazing.

keep writing!
Zainab

Good story but you would have benefited from an editor who made you reduce the length by about a third. I had to keep skipping forward through the interminable dialogue/internal musings the characters were constantly engaged in.

You are an amazing writer! Ever think about writing a book? Because, damn, your good.

308k words. I'm a little disappointed at that ending. I wanted to know more than the what ifs. I read that there wasn't going to be a sequel was disappointed. I don't feel like we got a good dramione or if they healed fully, or if the make it, or even if they get together. I don't feel we seen any growth between them or if the over come their brokenness. It was a good story I just need more to the plot.

Ok well this is a good story and I have been enjoying it. There are just somethings I'm finding a annoying. The inner monologue are too long for my liking. I do like it but they just keep going and going and going. I find myself skipping some of it just to move onto the conversation that they're in the middle of. I also have an issue with the time leaps. Like you leave us on something and then days later the story continues, and I'm like did I miss something. It leaves so many questions and confusion. I also am going to start chapter 30 and that just leaves 6 chapters left to see if Hermione and Draco get together, but I have a feeling it's going to be too rush. Idk. I love a slow burn stories but it has to be done right not rush, bc it just leave me with a bunch of questions, and doesn't satisfy me. I like to be satisfied at the end of a story.

I always feel like a woman keeping a baby from their dad is just wrong. I am glad that you wrote that she was in the wrong and she realize she was wrong. That was truly a dirty move on her part. Had that situation in my family except it was a father that died not knowing he had a daughter, and a daughter that will never know her father.

First off just wanted to say I am enjoying this story. You have me feeling so much. I love when a writer can get me to feel for the characters. It's confusing for sure. Hermione wishing that she was 17 again? Wasn't she in her six-year of Hogwarts. So she wishing her life back to b4 the war? Man what happen to her. We get pieces of the story but it's not frustrated for a reader. Again I like this story. I did come cross minor errors, buy still good.

I haven't finish this chapter yet I had to take a break. This chapter was freaking hard to read as a mom. Lord you hurt my soul. The pains that you described is unimaginable. God I'm in tears. I think I would have die after the manner attack. I wouldn't have the will to live. Hermione is strong and you wrote her like that. I sometimes feel writers write her too weak, but you didn't and I applaud you for that. She is the strongest Hermione character that I have read in awhile. Thank you for. allowing us to read you work.

The first time I read the story was four years ago. I’m reading it again carefully as a treasure. I just so love it.

This was a wonderful story. Thank you.