Reviews for Broken
GlowDust7501 chapter 36 . 6/6/2020
This story... I think it's the most like real life story that I've ever read. No one was perfect or completely happy and it just made everything seem so real. The way you characterized Hermione's struggles really hit deep because I've felt like that too and I just... Thank you for writing this
Lyla Rose chapter 3 . 6/4/2020
I'm confused-
What happened between the Golden Trio?
Guest chapter 36 . 6/2/2020
dontlookatmeplease chapter 11 . 6/2/2020
I am not one to cry. I have to admit this chapter did make me tear up
Emerald2402 chapter 36 . 6/1/2020
I am not the type of person to gush about how im "crying literal tears" but goddamn this story... There were moments when i choked up, had blurry vision but had to keep reading in the hope that it got better. This was artfully done and im so glad i read it. Your Draco was amazing too and i love the back and forth push and pull between the characters especially when their friends got involved... Amazing.. Just amazing
AStarryWitch chapter 23 . 5/28/2020
Does anyone feel that Rockabye Baby by Clean Bandit is the perfect song to describe the relationship between Matthew and Hermione? I do.
Windzhy Kazuma chapter 36 . 5/28/2020
Thank you for amazing fanfic
Nai chapter 36 . 5/25/2020
I realise it's fanfiction but it's odd how ooc everyone is. Hermione would never sleep with BOTH of her best friends. Harry would never be so negligent in duty especially when lives are on the line. Also I doubt he'd have such an orthodox view about abortion. What happened to her body her choice? Ginny and Hermione actually DID get along in the books and were actually quite good friends. Seems like all the characters were built up to make Hermione the damsel in distress.
animefangurlcraz chapter 22 . 5/24/2020
talk about over-reaction with ginny - just like ron - like siblings. seems like only molly weasley is the only level headed weasley in the family!
animefangurlcraz chapter 12 . 5/24/2020
What a revealing chapter - Ron is such an idiot, especially when Malfoy and Hermione keep trying to end the conversation, he has to add another remark that will only fuel the fire. As Hermione would say," what an idiot."
animefangurlcraz chapter 11 . 5/24/2020
This was such a touching photo omg - I had tears in my eyes about poor Matthew Granger!
Guest chapter 36 . 5/21/2020
so shit
FutureNargleHunter chapter 33 . 5/21/2020
While theres no doubt that you're a good writer, this story was extremely disappointing. It droned on and on and there was little to no chemistry between Draco and Hermione. The only thing that kept me going were the dramatic cliffhangers and the anticipation that something epic would happen between the two main characters. Even after they've gotten together now, I'm still bored. This fic started off really well and had so much potential. There's barely any growth and progression in the characters. What a shame.
strawberrytear chapter 11 . 5/15/2020
Ive read this one before years ago but gosh it hits harder now that ive lost a child myself. You've really captured how brutal that blow is
kerrmit chapter 1 . 5/11/2020
This is one of the few Dramione fanfics I've read where Lavender, Ron, and Pansy are all good guys lol. I appreciate that you didn't bash Ron because he really is a loyal friend and doesn't deserve to be treated like a jerk or an idiot just because he didn't work out with Hermione. I also really liked Hermione's character a lot. She went through a lot of humbling and you portrayed that accurately. Sometimes her know-it-all attitude and self-righteousness make her hard to like, even if that's a big part of her character in the HP series, but I enjoyed her in this book. This story really made me cry, but it was worth it and there were a lot of beautiful quotes. In a way, I can relate to Hermione's journey to loving and forgiving herself and not being afraid to live. This was worth the read! Thank you
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