It's a good start, can't wait to read more.

What the HELL did she lie about?

Please update soon.

i really like it!

you showed her emotions brilliantly..

and you got what you wanted.. i'm bloody curious now!

is there going to be a next story..? wherre you explain what went wrong...?

Please please pretty pleas

well byez

Ps. check out my stories please to! i really need people to review,, otherwise they'll be lost forever!

This is very interesting. I am currently extremely confused, and I wish to see more. LoL.

That was amazing! Angst from the get go, heartbreaking - yes, confusing - indeed! A riddle, wrapped in an enigma, blah, blah, blah, perfect! Great start, you're going to break our hearts with this one aren't you?

Consider my curiosity tweaked

:heart: the prolouge is absolutely stunning, wonderfully written.

The prolouge title reminded me of a quote from The Outsiders, Ponyboy says "I lie to myself, but I rarely believe me." Or something or the other, that's what I've got from memory.

It was a bit confusing, in the beginning, but I'm going to assume that was the 'feel' and how the prolouge was intended to be written.

Despite the melencholic mood, it was a joy to read, I loved it and cannot wait for more.

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