Reviews for Stealing
Agnez chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
OMG! That was funny. I love it!
xXgoodbyeXx chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
This was a good one-shot! I like Cloud and Tifa's conversation toward the end of this! Nice job!
Vaneeta chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
i really liked this fic :D i love clo ti! and it gave it a little edge because it wasn't sappy or anything, good work :)
nitaBonita chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I really lyked it! it was really good!
Tori128 chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Very good.

Rose Crowess chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Yeah, Tifa was way off, she'd never do anything like that, but I rode with it 'cause I thought it was supposed to be funny so I didn't mind. The only problem I had with it was Barrett's strange accent.. the way you wrote it seemed like he was talking more like Cid than himself.
algavia chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
i actually thought it was great! *-*

the characterizations and everything else. good job ;D
bforbrigitta chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Your descriptive style of writing is particularly impressive. I love how you juxtaposed Cloud and Tifa's positions ]

Was a fun read, and the way that you wrote it considering what would actually happen is great, you pay great attention to detail.

Good work ]

Dragon Reverb chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
just wondering did cloud get his bike back it's so cool and nice looking that it's a wast that it's gone and what you mean by parts of the buster sword? i tought the seven swords is called the first tsrugi when it's one...?
elebelly chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
nice little one shot here

yeh it did seem a lil OC but dont worry! good nevertheless! x
XxXRibbinzXnXChainzXxX chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I think it was worth reading. And Tifa did seem a bit off, otherwise I think Cloud was fine. Sweet!

Yeah like he just reaches in the fire and pulls out the sword...pfft...yeah rite! Heehee! Nice.
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
no kiss no huggy scene! lol
YACCBS chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I could definitely see Tifa jacking his bike, thinking it a perfectly innocent bit of fun. And Cloud's reaction seemed pretty in character to me as well, since she did it without a second thought to her safety and therefore what it would mean to him and the kids if something had happened. I liked it - made me grin and feel bad at the same time :P Nice job.
kayinay chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Becki, the story is not crap. Tifa is just too submissive, so XP

I cannot believe you posted this at 1 in the morning. Please tell me you didn't do that, and that my email just arrived at 1:23... *stare*

Lots of love, this story is still so cute.
macalaniaprincess chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
heehee - this story really brightened my day, so thanks!

The thought of Tifa doing something so reckless really made me giggle! (I guess even she needs to do something crazy and irresponsible once in a while! heck - don't we all?)

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