"Leave now and you might live," Orion warned coldly."

Wow. Just wow. "And his Unspeakable instincts kicked in." Wonderful. So is that how they deal with terrorists? Ask them to leave? As far as I know, highly trained personnel used to dealing with dangerous criminals fire first and ask questions later.

Harry knew the man was dangerous. What does he do? Offer him a chance to fucking leave.

Nope. I'm dropping this now. Glad that I only made it to chapter 3 despite my inner self telling me to drop at chapter 2.

Well, fuck. If it's for the sake of story then I would understand. But in real life, someone who's highly trained at fighting high level criminals shouldn't be easily distracted. You portrayed Harry as one of the strongest Unspeakables out there, and yet he was felled by a loser and a rat.

Wait I thought Nagini died

Hi,, Not sure if you still come on here but... ive been reading this story for about a week now and I realize that the last update was 5 years ago. I know had gotten engaged and are probably married with a little bundle of joy or 2 by now..

Just wanted to know if this was ever finished and put on a different site?

Please please update soon!

changing snapes dad to a wizard will have so many concequenses its not even funny

sigh duel animagus, an inner animal represents who you are, lions are loners where as wolfs are pack animals, in other words complete opposites and not possible. why you made this mistake is beyond me, simply do a wolf and a hawk that makes aa little more sence. but i am beginning to think this whole story doesnt make sence, shame cus you writing style is good

hello i am from the future.
ahh i see you have a permit for that, well never mind just fill in the standart time travelers form and we'll get you settelt.
i will thank you
now one last thing promise not to change everything.
cross my hart.
good it will take a few days time to process but expect a visit from the dark lord soon to check up on you, or just head down to the dom and ask for rockwood he'll pass on any message. have you written a will yet?

this attack on harrys house is really stupid, where are harrys wards? how is it that they simply cut of the floo, how can ron take down everyone with 1 curse. it just dsoesnt make sence but i gues you wanted this attack and this was easiest

Wow! Nice story. Sorry to see it hasn't been updated the last couple of years. Thanks for writing!

This is AMAZING! Please update soon!

Bonjour,génial ton histoire !quand est prévue la suite?

So even going through allllllll of this...Harry won't have HIS happily ever after? Nope

Oh god! Please don't tell me Remus and Severus lose a parent! I know it's probly in the later chapter bit still! Anyways, this is an amazing book! I'm actually writing a story with a similar idea myself (with a different storyline don't worry, I'm not gonna copy) but I will never do this well. This story is so interesting, I'm fairly sure I will be up all night reading it. You've done a really good job making sure that the complicated story line makes perfect sense. This is an amazing book and I hope you had/have fun writing it. (Is the book finished?)

What WERE you on?