I absolutely loved this fanfic and can’t wait until you get the next chapter up so that I can continue to read and find out what’s going to happen next.

Annnnd now you've abandoned it.

Best story ever

Hi,
Good story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest.
Just one little comment;
Ron - Ronald Weasley - the underachiver - the slacker... is able to beat Harry - unspeakable extraordinary - who can beat the whole auror training force at one...
Or if not beat, kill a whole bunch of people, including Hermione(!) and MacGonagall, and Harry can't incapacitate one single man for that long?
Kind of hard to believe.
Otherwise, this story looks great! :) and as I said, can't wait to read the rest.
(Sorry about not leaving a name, but I'm just a guest at ffnet.)

Kind regards,
Letitia

I'm only on chapter 2 and I already know I won't be getting any sleep tonight and will probably be late for work in the morning! Haha you write so wonderfully I'm already hooked

Wish you would come back, you were an awesome writer.

R u gonna finish this story?

Please pretty please update this fanfic is amazing and I really wanna see what happens! No pressure tho I understand that sometimes people r just too busy

Are you ever gonna update this?!

please update

Lmao I don’t see why people are disliking this story since it is pretty well written, even if it doesn’t make much sense to people. I think it’s pretty well thought out, though others might not but I personally don’t really care what you think. I just hope at some point it will be updated or confirmed to not being worked on anymore.

I like it it's good

"Leave now and you might live," Orion warned coldly."

Wow. Just wow. "And his Unspeakable instincts kicked in." Wonderful. So is that how they deal with terrorists? Ask them to leave? As far as I know, highly trained personnel used to dealing with dangerous criminals fire first and ask questions later.

Harry knew the man was dangerous. What does he do? Offer him a chance to fucking leave.

Nope. I'm dropping this now. Glad that I only made it to chapter 3 despite my inner self telling me to drop at chapter 2.

Well, fuck. If it's for the sake of story then I would understand. But in real life, someone who's highly trained at fighting high level criminals shouldn't be easily distracted. You portrayed Harry as one of the strongest Unspeakables out there, and yet he was felled by a loser and a rat.

Wait I thought Nagini died