Reviews for Erasing History
Taeniaea chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
Great Story! Plz Plz Update it Soon!
Bobboky chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
very good
BDSanta2001 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
...I don't know why but I got this vision of Dumbledore stomping his foot and throwing a fit that Orion thinks the worst of him:

Dumbledore: "I can't manipulate you Orion/Harry, if you don't like me. Charles! Make him like me!"

Anyways... I liked the boys finally getting into Hogwarts, and I marveled at Severus smashing Malfoy's nose with the door.
LovelyLittleAngel chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
awesome chapter.

update soon!
Darth Demon2 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
Great chapter. Good luck with your original series.
Lina03 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
Great chapter and thank you for the update. I really hope that Severus is able to handle the other Slytherins well. Also, I can't wait to see how the dinner goes with Dumbledore, it should really be something. }
battousai222 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
good but ectremly short for this time. Sad that is to ponder upon.

oh well.

Tis story is good... it is.
peppymint chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
I totally agree with that. Dumbledore is grown up and set in his ways. He is not going to change.
Yaraslava Rada chapter 16 . 5/28/2008 sweet! Update again soon please!
haphazard1 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
Thanks for another very good chapter. I especially liked the discussion between Harry and his grandparents, and Charles observing Harry having a nightmare.
gaul1 chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
good chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Commedia chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
yeesh, wha'd he do?
murdrax chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
wow what an amazing chapter this really rocke3d and please update again soon!
jbfritz chapter 16 . 5/28/2008
Benjamin Breeg Reincarnated chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
i read your story dark apprentice it was a brilliant work of art, and after reading the first chapter of this story its already drawing me in you are an amazing writer please keep it up!
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