|Reviews for Erasing History|
| Mistress of Potions chapter 49 . 3/2
I hope that this story is just on holiday, instead of abandoned. And I won't ask you when there will be an update.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/17
But Tobias Snape is a muggle?
| Saissa chapter 49 . 2/13
This was an absolutely wonderful story! It appears to be almost finished. Maybe it just needs an epilogue. I feel that there are just a couple of loose ends.
I would love to know what name the firstborn son of Lily and Severus was called. Because this child would in effect be Harry's half brother. I would also like to know when and how Voldie was killed before July 31st 1980.
| Saissa chapter 41 . 2/13
Yes. It has happened often especially in fan fic that magicals dont even bother to try and save the dead person whereas Muggles will still TRY and do anything else to save the person who is in danger of staying dead!
| Saissa chapter 16 . 2/12
This story is wonderful so far, but the sharp jump from summer camps at age 9 to age 11 was a bit too much. I think you could have done at least one more chapter of the kids childhood at age 10, before sending them off to Hogwarts.
I also think you could have changed history slightly and maybe put Lily and Remus into Ravenclaw, Severus into Slytherin and James and Sirius into Gryffindor - that would have spread the houses out amongst the families and allowed more interhouse unity!
You also forgot to mention Pettigrew. I hope he went to Hufflepuff since we know he is a coward.
| Saissa chapter 3 . 2/11
This is wonderful.
I can't believe that in more than 1 years of reading HP fics, I have never come across this one before!
| Quoba chapter 1 . 2/10
You should warn that it is a Harry/Hermione. When you say Harry's familly you suspect Harry, Ginny, James, Albus and Lily and not Harry and the bookworm
| Fury074 chapter 34 . 2/6
Patronuses, not patroni.
| Fury074 chapter 32 . 2/6
Kestrel dies then helps take Griffin home?
| Fury074 chapter 25 . 2/6
Nagini is dead already, right?
| aptteach123 chapter 49 . 2/1
Awesome chapter! I won't ask when the next chapter will be ready, but I do hope it's soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next :D Keep up the great work, I'll be waiting for however long it takes you to update this story.
| MeowChan88 chapter 49 . 1/23
EVEN THOUGH ITS BEEEN YEARS THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES IVE READ
| Calmzone1 chapter 32 . 1/19
you have Kestrel being thrown in the path of the AK as well as grabbing Gryffin - great story
| Calmzone1 chapter 26 . 1/19
love how Voldie can't think up original names and has to start a linear one instead. after all, who calls themselves flight from death?
| Calmzone1 chapter 25 . 1/19
great chapter loved the turkey - um, Nagini was killed when the house fell on her and Voldie but she's thinking of switching sides here because Harry's the Lord Slytherin