Reviews for Erasing History
clexfan chapter 49 . 7/27/2013
This chapter worth the wait. Congratulations on the engagement. Good luck! :-)
Guest chapter 49 . 7/17/2013
Ok I like so far, But Please keep James has Harry Father.
AnFan-n-More chapter 25 . 7/2/2013
I know you are very much past this chapter, but I will say "huh?" to Voldemort talking to Nagini at the end of chapter 25 here. Nagini was killed in the fight with Voldemort earlier... Was this a change in your plot at this point?

You might want to either fix the fight, or fix the conversation. Or, in a narrator's voice or whatever, mention that Voldemort is starting to really go insane talking to his dead familiar in his mind.

Love the story so far.
mekareami chapter 49 . 6/27/2013
Still enjoying and eager for more. Hope school is going . Tyvm for writing
MWRANDOM chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
I like this so far. I must say though that I'm not sure what it says about a family when they have a powerful truth serum just lying around in their sitting room...
stephenopolos chapter 45 . 6/15/2013
His assault on lily's mind and the sleep spell could be seen as taking undesired action against the potter family and therefore a breach of his 'unbreakable' vow. At this point in time Albus Dumbledore should have completely or partially lost his magic, or should be dead.
stephenopolos chapter 39 . 6/15/2013
What if they just tossed moldy-shorts through the veil of death in the DoM?
stephenopolos chapter 21 . 6/15/2013
I.. - I think I hate you now for that... Soul link...

I would say that he is no longer harry but orion. He may share genetics with his future self if lily and James do get married. But he is a different person.
lilmisadiva chapter 49 . 6/15/2013
this was very exciting cannot wait for the next chapter and congrats on your new life journey in marriage and school I just graduated university myself
Mari Wollsch chapter 49 . 6/11/2013
great story, when will you continua? xxxxxx
Mari Wollsch chapter 25 . 6/11/2013
is nagini not dead?! x
tricorvus chapter 6 . 6/9/2013
Beautifully written
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
Wow. I really, REALLY like what you're doing with the characters, the changes as to time, and who knows whom, and what their home lives are like as children. Very entertaining.
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
The color ranking system was neat, although it was too much for me to get my head around.
Wizard parents seem to have it slightly easier than Muggle ones.
Why did you have Remus being raised by an aunt who calls him Freak, like Harry did?
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
Wicked. Usually when authors send Harry back, it's to his early school years and he has to work not to reveal himself, but in sending Harry back to JAMES' youth, and having him reveal all to his own grandparents, you've neatly side-stepped all that damn angst...
Rock on
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