Reviews for I am who I am
fig language chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
when you write poetry, could you try to diverge beyond the obvious? be creative; use literary tools like sybolism, metaphors, similies. don't just say "there is shelling and bombing," use figurative language to dance around the point. In a poem, word choice is limited so every word is very important. please make each word choice count. pretty please? "death is a bad thing" ? Oy vey
iamthe-lizard-king chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
*blows nose* very good.

i luv it.

keep writing.

Satan's Apprentice
Two Drunk Sicilians chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
*Sniff Sniff* This isn't necissarrily just BJ, it could be any of the guys on M*A*S*H. Well... except Hawkeye or Frank. Staying san just ain't their thing, ya know?

Very lovely, my dear.
GryffindorQueen1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2002
Very touching.