Reviews for Die, Black, Die Slowly
Viridis73 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
Drone minded. God, I love it. Really, I do like Jacob - he was just truly irritating through most of Eclipse.
Viridis73 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I loved it! Mind you I do like Jacob, but, I love Edward. I love reading from his point of view.
Anna562 chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
You do a marvelous job with Edward's POV! He's usually so serious (and morose). It's nice to "hear" his sense of humor: a phase disaster waiting to happen; Bella was the one who thought jumping off a cliff was a good idea; I don't have my gauntlets with me; a Mother's Day vase for Esme, etc.

I really enjoy reading your work. Thanks for writing.
jingles4thestorm chapter 4 . 2/17/2009
That was hardcore to say the least. I loved your EPOV's. If you get the chance you should check mine out. Lots of people like it and I would love to know what you think since yours is so kickas.
jingles4thestorm chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Hell yeah, it's all on Edward man.

You did a really good job of writing this. I never even considered Jacob's fantasies playing in his mind so good on you
Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Loved it, I always thought that confrontation was a tad lacking.
Amber Energi chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Wow, you did great for this being your first Twilight fic. You can get into Edward's head very easily. I would love for you to do more scenes of Eclipse from Edward's perspective. I have always wondered what he thought when he saw Bella kiss Jacob. Also his thoughts during "Compromise" would be awesome. I really hope you will continue writting Twilight fics.
lunamorada17 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
It's so funny. I love it.
Allyouhavetodoisbreathe chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
loved it :)

totally realistic and the characters worked well- i liked charlie


how did you get into this community?

:) thanx
Claw chapter 4 . 1/16/2009
These were really great.
kallisti23 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I think you really got Edward's voice right. It feels very true to him. Great work!
mishel635 chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Great story! I just started reading fanfic in the last few weeks and I really enjoyed this! Great writing and a great idea for Edward's POV. Thank you!
Just Another Phase chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
LOVED this one...intelligent reference to Romeo...Thanks and please write more Twilight fanfic!
Just Another Phase chapter 3 . 1/6/2009
I am leaving a comment on every story, because it's the least I can do for such an amazing author! Thanks so much...truly amazing stories from my fav POV!
Just Another Phase chapter 2 . 1/6/2009
Holy crow this was good! I can't say that enough about your stories...please,please, please write some more! They are so good!
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