|Reviews for Before I Fade|
| BethylOTPs chapter 2 . 3/16
When Kira is caught
HAHAHAHAH AHAHAH OMFG YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE OH GOD THATS HILARIOUS
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/26
Oh boy i just wanted to be relaxed by L!
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/26
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/26
| romeliegeregia1 chapter 48 . 1/7
I never thought i would find such beautiful and passionate and pure love in a story ideally. I hope to live my life spending with someone who will love me passed my flaws and love me and need me like i would towards him..and hope to forever keep the feelings the same and love me before i fade and forever after :)
| Lotusxdoll chapter 48 . 12/3/2014
I have read Before I Fade a few times and I have to bow my head in shame for never reviewing. Shame on me!
Rylie is by far one of my favorite O.C's. Her relationship with L just felt so natural to me as a reader. You created her in a way that she wasn't a Lawliet replica with some crazy smarts (which I come across in a lot of LxOC stories). She matched up with him perfectly in a way that makes sense. And Rylie was real to me. When she was scared of losing Lawliet, I felt that as if she were a real person about to lose their love. When she was reunited with him, I felt it. I got emotional and it surprised me because that rarely happens with fanfics that I read. But that's just how well Rylie was developed. She took on a life of her own and she just felt like a real person with flaws and all. As for her romance with Lawliet, I have to tell you, you made me envy them! Ugh such love and connection and it sickened me with how perfect and real their love felt to me.
I guess to sum up this whole review, Before I Fade is one of those stories I will never get tired of reading over and over because it is just so beautifully written and Rylie, though fictional, feels like a friend to me. Does that seem weird? Hopefully not. I miss your work! Please, please write something new or update some of your other amazing stories!
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 9 . 8/31/2014
OMG I TOTALLY HAS SUSPICIONS SHE WAS ASSOCIATED WITH THE DEATH NOTE! Might seem as though I'm lying and saying this to sound like a know-it-all but I'm telling you, I did ;) Wasn't too sure though and I overlooked it.
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 8 . 8/31/2014
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
NAWWW XD L is just too damn lovable. And I love Riley, although I'm having trouble picturing her hair. Is it short, long, curly, straight? I DON'T KNOW. What I do know however is that I love this story. Here's a strawberry as a way of saying kudos xD
| RedTears14 chapter 48 . 8/16/2014
I'm in tears it was a sweet ending I'm happy for them. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
| Pain in the LawliPop chapter 48 . 8/8/2014
I cried. I don't cry. But... I cried... Whyyy?! Where is this sequel you were going to write? I don't know if I can cope if you don't write one soon! It doesn't matter that it's been six years since this was written! I'm sure everyone would LOVE to read it! AND one starring Watari and his brothers and sisters! I love your writing style as I'm sure you've heard many times already by various different people but it's true! :)
...I'll stop rambling now...
| D8nise chapter 48 . 7/30/2014
I love this story soooo much... I finished it in one sitting XD you had me bawling my eyes out more then once T-T and even here in the end I'm crying :3 I really enjoyed your writing style and am certainly going to check out your other stories 33 xxx
| peddie-obsessed1.0 chapter 14 . 7/29/2014
What? Aizawa knows her name's Rylie? This just got interesting... :)
| kittyrawrrawr chapter 48 . 7/11/2014
i have read a few good L x oc but this one had me cried the most...I'm simply in love with it...I'm going to forget this story...then within a few months I'm going to remember you...and come back to reread and have the feelz again...omg...im still crying oh my tears!
| Bookworm2413 chapter 19 . 7/10/2014
THE BEST SONG for this chapter is probably Just a Dream by Carrie Underwood. It goes 'Baby why'd you leave me? Why'd you have to go I was counting on forever now I'll know, I can't even breathe it's like I'm looking from a distance, standing in the background everybodies saying 'He's not coming home now' this can't be happening to me! This is just a dream.'