|Reviews for Before I Fade|
| MonaTheGreat chapter 48 . 6/9
*SOB* This story was wonderful, so sad but uplifting at the same time. You certainly put me on a roller coaster of emotions. Thank you for writing this story, I truly loved it.
| MonaTheGreat chapter 20 . 6/9
BUt...I love this story. along with your others! You are a great writer.
| MonaTheGreat chapter 20 . 6/9
False The woman that light had go hang herself was pregnant too. False.
| Guest chapter 48 . 6/2
came to read this again and this story always touch my heart. From the beginning to the end you are a wonderful person. The ending always being me to tears. I am glad this story is here still and so far no one dare try to steal it for you. I dont know if you are still active on here but I hope you are reading the reviews. Thank you for this lovely story 3
| BethylOTPs chapter 20 . 5/31
I feel smart, and I got it as quick as L did. As soon as I saw you slip that rule there the first time I was all "yes tiny L's running around... I mean more than the ones we already have"
| BethylOTPs chapter 18 . 5/31
Omg she's PREGNATE!
She can't die because she has someone who is immune to the death note in her I'm calling it!
| BethylOTPs chapter 2 . 3/16
When Kira is caught
HAHAHAHAH AHAHAH OMFG YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE OH GOD THATS HILARIOUS
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/26
Oh boy i just wanted to be relaxed by L!
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| romeliegeregia1 chapter 48 . 1/7
I never thought i would find such beautiful and passionate and pure love in a story ideally. I hope to live my life spending with someone who will love me passed my flaws and love me and need me like i would towards him..and hope to forever keep the feelings the same and love me before i fade and forever after :)
| Lotusxdoll chapter 48 . 12/3/2014
I have read Before I Fade a few times and I have to bow my head in shame for never reviewing. Shame on me!
Rylie is by far one of my favorite O.C's. Her relationship with L just felt so natural to me as a reader. You created her in a way that she wasn't a Lawliet replica with some crazy smarts (which I come across in a lot of LxOC stories). She matched up with him perfectly in a way that makes sense. And Rylie was real to me. When she was scared of losing Lawliet, I felt that as if she were a real person about to lose their love. When she was reunited with him, I felt it. I got emotional and it surprised me because that rarely happens with fanfics that I read. But that's just how well Rylie was developed. She took on a life of her own and she just felt like a real person with flaws and all. As for her romance with Lawliet, I have to tell you, you made me envy them! Ugh such love and connection and it sickened me with how perfect and real their love felt to me.
I guess to sum up this whole review, Before I Fade is one of those stories I will never get tired of reading over and over because it is just so beautifully written and Rylie, though fictional, feels like a friend to me. Does that seem weird? Hopefully not. I miss your work! Please, please write something new or update some of your other amazing stories!
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 9 . 8/31/2014
OMG I TOTALLY HAS SUSPICIONS SHE WAS ASSOCIATED WITH THE DEATH NOTE! Might seem as though I'm lying and saying this to sound like a know-it-all but I'm telling you, I did ;) Wasn't too sure though and I overlooked it.
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 8 . 8/31/2014
| outcast-scribbler-x chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
NAWWW XD L is just too damn lovable. And I love Riley, although I'm having trouble picturing her hair. Is it short, long, curly, straight? I DON'T KNOW. What I do know however is that I love this story. Here's a strawberry as a way of saying kudos xD