Reviews for Fundamental
yaoilovergirl chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Hmm, hi there. I'm writing this not as a review but as someone who is in dire need of a beta-reader and who has read your beta-profile and your author description and really likes what she read but couldn't find any email address ;P I have published some Naruto fanfics but at the moment I'm at a total down-point because my 'writing-spirit' as I'd like to call it has totally vanished. Just went up and poofed into thin air. Now, I promised my readers that I would finish my works come what may but I desperately need someone who not only corrects my spelling and grammar but who also kicks my ass from time to time to get me going. My nickname is yaoilovergirl and my stories (yaoi, Shiky x Neji) are here on and aff. Fateful Days, the sequel Fateful Nights (which has me wringing my hands for help) and A Little Bit of Peace and Quiet. If you're still beta-ing please let me know if you'd be up the task!
Zachary Finnius O'Leary chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Tehee oh yes...loved it...
ScarletF0x18 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
i love it _
xxx chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
wow...fucking hot

not bad for your first not bad at all

animaforlife99 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
wow ive never read a story where kurama and hiei were THAT ooc . . . . . i loved it! it was fuckin hot! its not always easy to kind stories THIS hot!
ruthie balboa chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
I liked it. You did a decent job with the lemon part. I liked the slight story to the one-shot as well. I have read better lemons but you did fairly well. I think you should write more of them. Sometimes it's hard to find a decent lemon out there where the writer does not cut it off mid-action.
Chi Haku chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
*claps* For your first lemon, that was hella sexy.
yaslanagirl chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
It's great! _ I happen to sort of enjoy HxK romance though, so maybe I'm a little biased? _~* P
Koneko-Hiruka chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I really enjoyed reading it. I especially enjoyed the line "But then, no angel had a mouth that dirty either." It made me laugh. XD
IllusionOfAghony chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Lol, Kurama you sneaky little fox you! Love Hiei flirting then backing away then flirting again, so cute!
Cat Streaked By Rain chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
ROFL I loved it! Totally out of nowhere but awesome all the same.
Prophetess Of Doom94 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
omg! that was hott! was this seriously your first smutty sex story? it was more like a pro's! dude, you've got some serious talent, especially for this being all the way out in left feild!
Katie Jane chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
That was great xD I'm loving it! Amazing work.
Angelus1889 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
OMG! Kurama has a very dirty mouth and Hiei's ON TOP for once! My dream come true! XD

I lurved it! :D
Psychodic chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
O.O are you sure this was yrou first lemon? it was very good but i never knew kurama would have sutch a dirty mouth
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