Well written. I liked it!

You "do" emotion and passion and intimacy VERY well. That was ... lovely. Their longing for each other came through clear as a crisp, autumn morning sky. The fulfillment they felt in each other's company was achingly beautiful.

If this is a representative sample of your writing, I HAVE BEEN MISSING OUT! This goes in Favorites, I go searching through your work.

Very romantic and sweet and yet not cheesy at all! You have a gift for romance.

Wow this is a very good story, their whole love making scene is very well writen without being a full out lemon sort of a story. It was more romantic this way. Again very good job

Even though i am a BBxRae fan i still thought what this was a great peice of work... Its amazing how you described the love between them too!

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lolz i loves it. good job, hope to read more from you soon. YOU ARE FANTASTICAL!

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wow . . . really . . . passionate writting and that's an understatment. Great detail and I love the ending . . . perfect.

Aw, I really enjoyed that! :)

Your writing style is very mature and ..refreshing!

Keep writing!

-SmokinLeech

!wow! truly stupendoud! that was probably one of the best stories ever! please, i can't wait for your next story!

That was amazing! i love it!

That was good! very good! i cant believe how good that was! and 4 once rae just has rob 2 start out with instead of the whole fighting 4 him thing tat normally happens! that was amazinng! keep up the good work!

TTYL

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I love you writing style, your're so descriptive.

Loved the story.