|Reviews for Optivus|
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/18/2017
Please update! First reading I was very confused and wasn’t too interested, but as I continued I only grew to enjoy it more. I love your writing and the concept is so different and crazy, that I can’t help be captivated! I know it’s been a year, but I hope you find the strength to continue. Many wishes, -alp
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/20/2017
LOVE THIS! please update
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/15/2017
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS I BEG OF YOU! It's amazing and I literally can't be left hanging :(
| Bluewolf80 chapter 33 . 8/10/2017
i dearly hope you continue with this series. When I first began reading, it wasn't at all what I was expecting. I was pleasantly surprised at the amazing quality of your writing. The way you incorporate bits of the HP Universe is simply ingenious! This is definitely going on my favorites list. I will be anxiously awaiting an update!
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/31/2017
I keep reading this story at regular intervals and it never fails to get me hooked and find new details in each reading. I hope you keep writing. xxxxx
| anayathepapaya chapter 33 . 7/22/2017
This is a super cool AU! Well thought out... keep it up!
| JLPotter chapter 26 . 7/20/2017
You write so amazingly well- it's insane! The complexity and depth your characters have is astounding, and I am so hooked on this story (and Philologus as well) despite the fact it is not the first time I'm reading this work of art. This chapter really got me good (again omg). Although I know that I will once again reach a pause in the story, I hope with all my heart that you'll come back and pick up where you left off. Know that we are all awaiting your next update with bated breath and excitement, ready to welcome you with open arms. No matter how long it takes, we will be here cheering for you! Hope you've been alright, and then things are fine in your department :) Always.
| Pip-2250 chapter 33 . 6/11/2017
Wow, I can't even believe that you are still writing this. I have these notifications set to go to an old email address that I had not checked in over a year and there were a couple of new chapters in here that I did not know about (and, since it had been so long, I definitely had to go back a few chapters and re-familiarize myself with where we were in the story).
Ack, James is SO freaking noble. I understand Lily's frustration and worry, because his is so much the quintessential Gryffindor.
I also REALLY appreciate that you have made Peter an integral part of this story (I kind of love him as the almost younger brother, but so obviously the Prince here). Most authors just try to write him off as a groupie or evil kid off the bat, but I don't think he was. I think he was just as much a part of the Marauders as the other three, and when they all graduated and started living their lives during a war, he was terrified. I don't condone his choice, but I also don't want to condemn kid Peter to being a Death Eater in training like others were (*cough*LuciusMalfoy*cough*). Although, you've even given Lucius and Snape some redeemable qualities in this story and made them believable as redeemable guys who, even though we may not agree with their methods, they are doing things for the greater good.
Anyway, I am so glad that you have continued with this story, and I really hope you see it through to the end. I have been reading this and its prequel for too many years to give up on you now!
| dlynne3 chapter 33 . 5/28/2017
I just found this and Philogus a few days ago and I'm in love! I really hope you'll finish this story.
| MLJ chapter 33 . 4/18/2017
Hello. Optivus fan here. Just wondering when an update will happen because this fic is bloody brilliant. That is it I just wanted you to know that I'm here for you (god this sounds so sentimental) as in a non-romantic way and a dedicated fan kind of way that is also a dedicated reviewer who loves this fic and who is completely botching up the review she tried to make to let you know that you need to bloody hurry up with your update (Yeah it is 2:30am and my brain isn't working but seriously update soon). I'm just going hit the post 'review button' now before I make an every bigger fool of myself.
| Elaine chapter 33 . 4/4/2017
It is a great story. I liked it very much. Your writing skill is awesome. I would like to ask some questions to you. What has been happening to Celena? She hasn't made much appearance lately. Moreover what is happening back at the Palace. Also what has happened to Seth.
I hope that you will update it sooner.
| SLYTH3R1N chapter 33 . 1/25/2017
This story has been a very refreshing change of pace, I really enjoy the insight into each of the characters and their backgrounds. I hope you choose to continue with more chapters!
| Beckster384 chapter 33 . 1/16/2017
I just finished reading through Philologus and Optivus for the first time. I've enjoyed the stories! Thank you for writing and posting them. :) I will enjoy seeing how Optivus ends, no matter how long it takes you to finish it. I understand that life gets busy! :)
| Anonymous chapter 33 . 12/24/2016
Greetings from India, I've been reading your story from the beginning of time, and I'm so thankful that you are continuing to write it. I really like your portrayal of characters because you, unlike a lot of other authors, portray each character as human rather than some creatures sent from heaven (which really annoys me). I hope everything great comes your way!
I really hope you continue writing! You made my Christmas :)
| Hajra chapter 33 . 12/19/2016
I can understand why Lily is upset, but I feel like James' nature - as being self sacrificing and putting others (and duty) before himself as well as having an active role in everything - has been well established in this story from the beginning and Lily knows that and knew that before getting into a relationship with him. So I get that she's upset but I don't think her prolonged anger is justified (it makes sense of course but I wish there was more perspective involved). Nor do I think it's fair for her to expect for him to compromise on that integral part of his identity and put her ahead of that or even think of it in terms of him having a choice and not choosing her. If she can't be with him because of this side of him that's still okay and unfortunate but I don't think her feeling angry with or wronged by him is fair, and it somewhat bugs me that no one is really getting the James perspective. I wish there's more on that, especially while he's already so burdened with everything.
That said, it was so lovely to find that you had updated and are still finding it in yourself to continue this story. I hope you find motivation in the love so many of us have for your writing!