|Reviews for Furious Angels|
| james.mattson.7 chapter 18 . 4/19
Congratulations on a well written story. Do you ever plan on adding to it?
| Nanchih chapter 8 . 4/8
So, Ron has the Diary this time?
| Brisingr-fire chapter 18 . 3/11
Frankly,I'm disappointed.I had finished "I saw my lady weep" and was quite eager to read more from that story,your way of writing was mature and really nice.I was so hopeful when I started reading this story..I mean I'm a total fan of time-travel started the story in a good soul stones were okay i guess...but then you started piling all that rubbish of Ancient and Noble House of..blah was really childish you I like the fact that you did not make them remember everything but at the same time they did not forget I'm sure that Ginny would have remembered the McGonagall is soo boring.I'm also sure that Dumbledore would have questioned Harry like in the original book when he is the Luna-Neville-Hermione triangle sounds way too OoC and disgusting to at the same time,there were some good bits in the story too.I appreciate the fact that you did not make Harry & Ginny to jump into a bed at the first 's a good thing that they retained their theme was good but you could have written it in a completely different and better way
| Epeefencer chapter 14 . 2/11
Really! Imperiousing Justin in front of Dumbledore? His sudden change of attitude would be a dead give-away. Very unlikely and oh so unbelieveable.
| Epeefencer chapter 8 . 2/11
With all their remembered knowledge, half complete as it may be, Harry and Ginny would certainly remember something connected to the Diary.
| Neumzie chapter 5 . 1/17
I feel like I've already had this answered cause this is a re-read for me, but i don't remember why Harry keeps calling Voldemort you know who. There's not explanation and with the reincarnation deal, he should be even less afraid, really
| Sined chapter 18 . 1/14
It's a shame this superb story ends here, so abruptly. Couldn't you write a sequel ? Cause I'd love to read it.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/4
Wow... Ginny really must be a lot stronger than Ron, since in-canon, she stopped Moldie-shorts from actually killing the victims. And she endured him for 10 months before she finally couldn't stop him anymore. 10 months. And here, Ron is outright killing the victims. Much like how he gave up only merely weeks after having the locket around his neck in DH. Hell, even Harry couldn't handle being possessed for a couple of minutes in OOTP. Dare we say that Ginny is legit stronger than Harry?
Ah, got off-topic. Apologies. I wonder why Harry and especially Ginny haven't remembered the diary yet... Since Ginny said she actually saw the thing, you'd think she'd remember it... Also... What's up with Luna, Hermione and Neville? A love triangle?
This is a very interesting take on time-travel, and I'm almost done! This is getting eerie but exciting.
| nayin17 chapter 18 . 12/18/2014
| nayin17 chapter 10 . 12/18/2014
McGonagall is becoming a BIG BORE!
| nayin17 chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
Hate Snape! I'm so glad Ginny kicked Draco's ass
| nayin17 chapter 6 . 12/18/2014
Go Harry Go! Draco deserved it
| nayin17 chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
While reading this I kept shouting in my head...SHUT UP MOLLY!
| nayin17 chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Very interesting first chapter...love Harry/Ginny forever
| Necrosdaf chapter 6 . 7/26/2014
I haven't read the whole story yet, but i have noted a notable difference in the portrayed attitude of Ron toward Hermione. In the chapter before, he was happy to receive her mail and eager to meet up with her, in this chapter he is suddenly thinking of her as a mudblood. Either you will have him be the diary writer in this story, or you should rethink your take on Ron in chapter 5, or chapter 6.
If he is to be given the diary... You really shouldn't hint at it quite so boldly in my opinion. For one, he could barely have gone beyond the Writing in a cool book stage while at home, and as far as foreshadowing is concerned, it is kind of too early in my opinion.