Reviews for Drifting Away
RadicalReason chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Beautiful oneshot.

"I look down at the pointed black rocks below that look like a set of rotting teeth." I especially love this line.
nikkiRA chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
This was really good, and I think it described much more accurately Bella's feelings then the book did. I especially liked this line: 'He promised me that once he left he would never return, it would be as if he never existed. How foolish he was to even think that my life could ever go back to what it was like before him, my life was altered as soon as he set foot in it. The change that was made is irreversible.' I never liked it when he said that, because I was like, 'well that's just dumb, obviously that's not going to happen.' Anyway, this was really good.
iDanax chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Wow! You really captured her feelings well there! It was beautifully written
LittleMissMoonbeam chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
that was so amazing. poor bella she just wants edward! Its so cute. I LOOVVEE IT!