Reviews for One Love Only
Bellanu421 chapter 22 . 1/3/2015
You write real well!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Whats with the 'white of the eyes' obsession you got there. I mean since chapter one till here...you used it atleat 50 times!
Sweets5236 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I love this story, keep up the great writing :)
VoodooLilies chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I love your story, it's so cute! Favorite James/Lily story
sgHEARTShp chapter 16 . 8/1/2010
Honestly I can't agree with your A\N i love Mika and she seems like a sweet beautiful shy young girl who deserves someone as brilliant as James Potter but the fact that James and Lily are soul mates and i love Lils more makes me kind of mad at Mika and mad at james because he forgot about Lily... HIS LILY! Lily is being very thick right now she hated James then she decided to be FRIENDS with him so he gets a girlfriend and she goes all depressed Lily is really messed up right now she doesn't want him when his single and likes her and now hes dating and friends with her she is all mad/sad its just frusturating me grrr... I hope Mika gets a great guy who treats her well because she is so sweet i hope she finds someone other than James that she is happy with
FiaGiggles chapter 22 . 7/26/2010
awwwwww.

it's so cute! More of that kind of stuf. PLEASE!

-s-
Mackiwaki chapter 6 . 4/19/2010
You use too much repetition. For example: "... showed the whites of their eyes." I'm sorry, but that can get really annoying.
Batamut chapter 22 . 9/30/2009
You have a very good story here and I can really believe that this is how James and Lily could of gotten together.

P.S. your OC Michaela is well made and I didn't for one second hate her for dating James
RoseRoseRose chapter 22 . 8/24/2009
I just read your story today and loved it :)

great job!

-Rose :D

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Jane chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
I would've finished reading all of the chapters, but my brothers are whiners and I have to get off the computer. sorry. It was decent, but I expected Lily to be more ill-tempered. There's a few spelling mistakes and stuff like that and overall I rather liked it. It wasn't cute enough for my taste. I love cute romances! Innocent, accidentally-on-purpose romances.
twilight2441476 chapter 22 . 5/25/2009
I adore this story! It was written amazingly! You're a great writer!

~twilight2441476
freakymisbah chapter 22 . 4/18/2009
amazin stretched it a bit (no offense)

but realy cute i love lily/james fanfic
FaithfulHPReader chapter 22 . 2/12/2009
I'm so sad that it's over! Great ending though. :)
FaithfulHPReader chapter 13 . 2/10/2009
Very good so far. Well, that definetly explains why Michaela left. xD
FaithfulHPReader chapter 9 . 2/8/2009
Great story so far! :)
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