|Reviews for Roku Naruto|
| Taryn chapter 20 . 3/2/2014
please update i love this story!
| fellow chapter 20 . 2/20/2014
Rinnegan: sheer awesomeness.
| fellow chapter 14 . 2/20/2014
This is a badass story.
| fellow chapter 11 . 2/20/2014
Poor Sasuke, that lad has probably been thoroughly traumatized by this trip.
| candy4beth chapter 20 . 2/13/2014
are you ever going to update this?
| foraslanthelion chapter 17 . 1/15/2014
I absolutely hate and despise bashing and all the shit that comes with it; it's annoying and drags down a good story with its blatantly irrational bull-shit. So even though you did it mainly for humor, I feel much more comfortable with the story and plot potentials, now - almost irrationally so. Great piece and I hope your do pick this up again someday.
| yukicrewger2 chapter 9 . 1/12/2014
yes because of the Yoda minded cat...
| Philodice chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
Trojan bunny...nice. Destined child? Overdone. Over done like rubbery, burnt eggs on black toast.
| animemaster5724 chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
Operation WTF. I like it, it had me laughing.
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/11/2013
sasuke and sakura i just dont see it despite her changing lol other than that GREAT story!
| kingrobert84 chapter 18 . 12/2/2013
you where doin so great with this story this was one of the pieces of gold are you gonna finish it? or are you gonna let turn into fools gold which is less than a penny?
| icecatfire chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
when i first read this and got to the ''mental retards'' part i laughed HARD thinking ''HOW did NO ONE in the village get this before!'' of course most of the village was either hating naruto or coursing the villagers stupidity to notice they're logic. XDXDXD oh my ribs they hurt. XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
| Bluemew22 chapter 20 . 12/1/2013
You're removing Drak, Antharos, and the rest? Awwww... Drak was my favorite. Also, doing so would just make this another SuperNaruto fic.
| Bluemew22 chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
Kakashi's Training time math intrigues me. Let's extrapolate that shit to an entire 4-year, January 1 to December 31, training period, shall we? ...and then his entire foreseeable shinobi lifetime counting the extreme lifespan of the Uzumaki Clan (starting now at 12 and going to roughly 112 to account for any loss of lifespan from the negative effects of using Kurama's Chakra)
I'll show all my work.
a) 12 hours each day
b) for 30 days
c) with a minimum of 500 clones assisting every day.
12 hours/day in 24 hour days 0.5 days of training
30 days/month 15 days of training each 30-day month.
Now let's see how many 30-day months there are...
Days (difference from 30)
1 on Leap Years
30 * 12 360 days, 5 extra days and 1 bonus every fourth year.
Now, I calculated that one Naruto, without clones, gets 15 days of training in each of those rounded months.
15 * 12 180 days of training per rounded year.
(5 * 0.5 2.5) 182.5 days of training per non-Leap years.
.5 183 days of training on the leap years.
I have now calculated the various amounts of training Naruto accomplishes alone in a year, including the variance for Leap Year's extra day.
Now, let's introduce factor C, the 500 minimum Kage Bunshin accelerating the training by factoring in a multiplication of 501 (remember, the original doesn't count among the clone population of 500)...
For the three basic years individually...
182.5 * 501 91432.5 days of training in a year with clones
converted up to standard years, that's...
91432.5 / 365 250.5 years of training in each standard year.
Store that number away, class, we'll need it later. For now let's calculate the same for the fourth year, with its extra day...
183 * 501 91683 days of training in a year with clones
91683 / 366 250.5 years of training in each leap year.
Still the same in the years units, but that's caused by the fact that both side of the division went up. To make the distinct difference properly represented, we will need to work in the days unit for a while longer.
91432.5 * 3 274297.5
91683 365980.5 days of training in the four year period with clones.
If we had remained with our previous calculations for his training each individual year...
250.5 * 4 1002 years of training in 4 years.
Which is exactly what is obtained through this new value of days and the average day/year ratio of the period... ((365 365 365 366) / 4 365.25)
365980.5 / 365.25 1002 years of training in the four year period with clones.
Now let's do as I said and extrapolate that to his entire lifetime. The Uzumaki Clan is stated in canon to live for ungodly long times, and Kurama's (the Kyuubi's) youki burned off a great deal with the auto-heal and massive damage caused by each transformation starting from the fourth tail. So I choose 112 as his theoretical age of death-by-time, longer than standard even today in real life, but not quite as obscenely long as implied by how much they play up the Uzumaki Clan's longevity in canon. And totally not because 100 is the number I get to calculate with because of this. (112 -12 100)
1002 years of training in four years.
25 four-year groups in a century
25,050 years of training in Naruto's estimated lifetime, ignoring any long-term conflicts that would prevent training in the interim.
So what did we learn? We've learned that "Super-Naruto" is entirely justified if Naruto is gifted with the knowledge that Kage Nunshin no Jutsu has this application, since in his one lifetime he can experience 250 and a half lifetimes of training using only 501 Narutos (the original and 500 clones, or 501 clones if the original is busy being an active-duty ninja) a day on training.
Keep in mind this is calculated using 500 as a bare minimum clone population, and Naruto can easily produce THOUSANDS each day without getting even slightly winded. By making 1001 clones instead to double the Narutos training, that becomes 50,100 years in a lifetime with no effort at all.
This is why "Super Naruto" fics don't bother me. Naruto doesn't even know what a learning curve IS. I do not doubt hat Naruto in canon could learn how to use freaking MOKUTON in a month if he took the 12 hours a day to work on it.
| Navn Ukjent chapter 20 . 11/18/2013
Nice story so far.
I hope you will update again soon (and finish the last chapter).