Reviews for Chuck vs the Seventh Day
Mooncow33 chapter 7 . 9/27/2009
Hi good story so far. The military tone of your story has me feeling a little picky though: F-14s would have been decommissioned for 4 years by 2012 and phoenix missiles are used for long range interception. A better pick would be F-18s wielding AIM-9 Sidewinders. Regardless, props for getting the Phoenix max speed correct.
Baylink chapter 24 . 6/10/2009
Well, I was *gonna* say "Oh, I love these... and you even did it in the right order (like I'm surprised...)

And then you went and did *that*.

Glad I'm a couple years behind. :-)
Baylink chapter 23 . 6/10/2009
Finally, she opened her mouth, and said, “I resign.”


I do wonder, though, if this was enough... Mid level management, so to speak, is still around, and anyone in-service under them could claim immunity under Martinez-Baker, so...
Baylink chapter 22 . 6/10/2009
Just warn the Secret Service first, Mr Prez...
Baylink chapter 20 . 6/10/2009
Please. I need to get some *sleep* tonight. :-)

However, over Tennessee, one of the turboprops had decided to throw a blade,

You're not a pilot, are you?
Baylink chapter 19 . 6/10/2009
You know, this is the only time I've wanted to yell at the characters.

You just offed the boss Fulcrum guy, and you have TF-77 in the plane with you: go *back*, you idiots!
Baylink chapter 16 . 6/10/2009
Which one are you, Williamson? Pinky? Or the Brain?
Baylink chapter 15 . 6/10/2009
Naw, Chuck; the Huey's a friendly; I heard it from Sarah, 3 chapters ago.

“Agent Walker, I’m rated in every type in the US Marine Corps and US Navy’s inventory, helicopters included."

One minor nit - I've heard it said (though, admittedly, it was in a novel, so that may not be accurate either) that the military only permits you to be 'officially' checked out in 3 types at a time.

I'm pretty sure it was Col. 'Bear' Malloy, in Rainbow Six, but it's the sort of throwaway non-plot-point detail that I usually assume is accurate.
Baylink chapter 8 . 6/10/2009
Hey, I've seen Wednesday, and her two parts are plenty for me...

Well, I guess there's that Romanian tennis player, but...
Baylink chapter 7 . 6/10/2009
"Leland Stanfield". Nice double half-gainer with a twist, there, JMG. That's a Stanford reference, and a - I think that's a ... damnit, for which author did Director Stansfield run the CIA? Vince Flynn? Or Dale Brown?

And what's with the Falcon? Is Dassault doing product placement with you?
Baylink chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
Holy frakkin shit!

You actually went there.

Oh, boy; we're AU alright.

Can't wait to see how you get yourself out of *this* one..
SamanthaLisaWalkerfan101 chapter 24 . 5/30/2008
Just when I thought I was gonna get a happy ending, you throw out that cliffhanger. Amazing writing. I could envision everything thanks to your very descriptive wording. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work!
Chas54 chapter 24 . 4/17/2008
So why can't someone, tie Carina too a bed just for once?
funkygirl4723 chapter 24 . 4/15/2008
OMG OMG OMG OMG! SO GOD! But you shot Sarah! Thank god we kno that she lives, due to ur other stories from this AU!
LeeCan chapter 24 . 4/15/2008
Wow, I am impressed. Very nice story. This had to take some time to put together. Again, wow.

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