Reviews for Chuck vs the Seventh Day
michaelfmx chapter 24 . 7/23
Another fantastic story in the 'Bright Side" story arc. This is really good. Lots of angst and emotion. Some of the good people...end up being bad. And some of the good people are really good. It is not a surprise to see how far Chuck and Sarah go to protect their family, but it is awesome to watch nonetheless.

This is the 5th story in this arc. I suggest reading 'The Seduction of Sarah Walker', 'Chuck vs The Bright Side', 'The Star Spangled Intersect' first and 'Sarah vs Nine Months'.
Mooncow33 chapter 7 . 9/27/2009
Hi good story so far. The military tone of your story has me feeling a little picky though: F-14s would have been decommissioned for 4 years by 2012 and phoenix missiles are used for long range interception. A better pick would be F-18s wielding AIM-9 Sidewinders. Regardless, props for getting the Phoenix max speed correct.
Baylink chapter 24 . 6/10/2009
Well, I was *gonna* say "Oh, I love these... and you even did it in the right order (like I'm surprised...)

And then you went and did *that*.

Glad I'm a couple years behind. :-)
Baylink chapter 23 . 6/10/2009
Finally, she opened her mouth, and said, “I resign.”


I do wonder, though, if this was enough... Mid level management, so to speak, is still around, and anyone in-service under them could claim immunity under Martinez-Baker, so...
Baylink chapter 22 . 6/10/2009
Just warn the Secret Service first, Mr Prez...
Baylink chapter 20 . 6/10/2009
Please. I need to get some *sleep* tonight. :-)

However, over Tennessee, one of the turboprops had decided to throw a blade,

You're not a pilot, are you?
Baylink chapter 19 . 6/10/2009
You know, this is the only time I've wanted to yell at the characters.

You just offed the boss Fulcrum guy, and you have TF-77 in the plane with you: go *back*, you idiots!
Baylink chapter 16 . 6/10/2009
Which one are you, Williamson? Pinky? Or the Brain?
Baylink chapter 15 . 6/10/2009
Naw, Chuck; the Huey's a friendly; I heard it from Sarah, 3 chapters ago.

“Agent Walker, I’m rated in every type in the US Marine Corps and US Navy’s inventory, helicopters included."

One minor nit - I've heard it said (though, admittedly, it was in a novel, so that may not be accurate either) that the military only permits you to be 'officially' checked out in 3 types at a time.

I'm pretty sure it was Col. 'Bear' Malloy, in Rainbow Six, but it's the sort of throwaway non-plot-point detail that I usually assume is accurate.
Baylink chapter 8 . 6/10/2009
Hey, I've seen Wednesday, and her two parts are plenty for me...

Well, I guess there's that Romanian tennis player, but...
Baylink chapter 7 . 6/10/2009
"Leland Stanfield". Nice double half-gainer with a twist, there, JMG. That's a Stanford reference, and a - I think that's a ... damnit, for which author did Director Stansfield run the CIA? Vince Flynn? Or Dale Brown?

And what's with the Falcon? Is Dassault doing product placement with you?
Baylink chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
Holy frakkin shit!

You actually went there.

Oh, boy; we're AU alright.

Can't wait to see how you get yourself out of *this* one..
SamanthaLisaWalkerfan101 chapter 24 . 5/30/2008
Just when I thought I was gonna get a happy ending, you throw out that cliffhanger. Amazing writing. I could envision everything thanks to your very descriptive wording. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work!
Chas54 chapter 24 . 4/17/2008
So why can't someone, tie Carina too a bed just for once?
funkygirl4723 chapter 24 . 4/15/2008
OMG OMG OMG OMG! SO GOD! But you shot Sarah! Thank god we kno that she lives, due to ur other stories from this AU!
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