|Reviews for A Stupid Excuse for a Fairy Tale|
| Crinsomtear chapter 10 . 3/8
I love that anime!
| hakivah chapter 11 . 12/12/2013
good conflict and resolve, ending was a bit weak/ the rest of the story made me want more/ i guess advice would be to revisit other parts of the story as you go along
| hakivah chapter 10 . 12/12/2013
ahHA im good at recognizing where u get some of your material from. I was thinking how haruhi like that was. Also there are parts of this story that really grate me but only because i see how ridiculous temari is being and being emotionally i sympathize with her. it's all very triply.
| hakivah chapter 9 . 12/12/2013
ah this story was written so long ago but i still really like how you developed it over the chapters
| hakivah chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
while i was reading this i definitely got the twilight vibe and bam there it was
| shinkumi-Live chapter 11 . 7/28/2011
I like your story. So cute and amusing, a bit OOC but still good.
I just dont like some things though; like how you portrayed Ino (I am not even a fan of her, but really), though I love how you made her not that a total bitch and also nice, I hate how you made Temari so bitchy specially at the part when Ino said it. I dont like how you made Temari so clumsy, being clumsy is cute, I find it cute that she trips but really, she tripped too much. And Shikamaru should be the one who is underestimating women and not the other way around.. And also, I hope it was Ino who punched Temari, to make her being not a wuss.
Though, I love how you made Shikamaru always smile, I find it charming. How you made Naruto friends with Temari, though he doesnt show much in the story.
Overall the story's good. _ I hope to read more TemaShika stories from you _
| CottonCandy4Sale chapter 11 . 12/8/2010
| Hana Kirima chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
:) i love it! the characters are so similair to the anime!
faved, and im just gonna keep reading!
| Ixae chapter 11 . 9/12/2010
Awesome story! I loved it!
| JSheiress chapter 9 . 9/7/2010
This is my favorite chapter! I love this story! :)
| gardensigernumbli chapter 11 . 7/17/2010
I waited until I finished the entire story before I commented, so this is going to be all over the place. First off, ew, Twilight. I admit, I read it, but honestly, your writing's probably better than Stephanie Meyers'. I'm assuming that's where you got the "stupid greenness" thing from, as well as the clumsiness. Meh. The whole Twilight thing also seems to bring a rather too-perfect touch to the story. Temari seemed a bit Mary Sue at times, and the story ended a little too perfectly. Although I like the fact that Tenten and Kankuro/Neji is still unresolved, because stories where everyone ends up with everyone else are ridiculous. On the other hand, yay Ouran and Enchanted! Notthat it really has to do with anything, but whatever. I like the integration of the characters, and how each one was introduced. Not to mention the quirky nicknames that Temari came up with for each of them. Temari's fear of being weak and Shikamaru-having-sex thing is also pretty ... interesting, to say the least. Probably because both situations have happened to me before. So that was a bit that I sort of connected with. Well anyway. Loved the story, keep writing!
| always-kh chapter 11 . 7/11/2010
good conclusion. i liked the song lyrics at first but then they got old. and i stopped reading them... i think ppl usually do that. i do love the song though :) a very cute fic. glad you didn't drag it out too long.
| always-kh chapter 9 . 7/11/2010
good chapter it has me in tears.
and... we learned a lot about ino too. and i'd be scared of the girl too.
a lot more about temari's psyche too. it's all well done and sad.
| always-kh chapter 8 . 7/11/2010
yay someone who actually knows there stuff and bothers to do a little damn research before mentioning schizophrenia.
a very good plotline i like how you adapt some of the elements. plus the pairings are good. but poor tenten, naruto too. that just sucks.
| always-kh chapter 6 . 7/11/2010
loved the conversations with her bros and i hope that she and tenten get along well, they're rather similar. all of her interactions and thoughts are quite amusing she's cute.