Reviews for Devil of the Hidden Leaf
Guest chapter 4 . 2/12
Ugh the cheesy and cliche shit annoys me. Plus with the already added harem it's annoying. And yes I'm annoyed you added a harem mostly because a lot of writers here give no shit when it comes to grammar and second it's overused and boring nowadays.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/28
when naruto buy out a inn cub bed room #b3 his home away form the claund one for some time he had his vest and whoples in his home and some art on the wall like his own tema pictherd on the wall one of his grilfrinde and some books he had took from the mob boos own home and the othershe sold them , when woking with Ibiki and anok he get the nickname hisobt .
Guest chapter 10 . 1/28
when in his mom old whepons shop and office he had find some wehopsn of palyingcard blands and some taps and old books on hands moves ,when woking in the bloom of theshop naruto find a killingsword snank axes and ueds them and get mather down ,
Guest chapter 7 . 1/28
sarkura anok tenten hinata ion and temal shoud be naruto wifes and kin shout be naruto own slver gril and he move his filmy to whipool couny land of eddis and his is morjdomy of it .
Emperor-Aurora chapter 1 . 1/2
Well you're a Kishimoto loving asshole, how's that for an "explanation"?
Dragonman109 chapter 24 . 12/29/2016
Update please.
peterpazo70 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Just cause he gets a small power up, he thinks he can do what he wants. Sasuke's so stupid. Are they ever gonna writ a fan fiction story where Naruto beats him over and over causing him to get rid of his arrogance, cause if there is already one like that, then i would gladly read it over and over.
Mangahiru chapter 24 . 11/22/2016
Still a great story so far. Hope to continue seeing chapters in the future.
Anime.Is.The.Best.555 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
actually in both the anime and the manga for naruto Haku is a androgynous male
Gojin1990 chapter 24 . 6/19/2016
Are you still working on this? How often do you update if yes?
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 5/22/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Haku's a woman you dumb shit.
AlucardChick101 chapter 2 . 4/16/2016
Awesome story. Keep up the great work. .
Guest chapter 10 . 4/9/2016
in his mom shop Naruto found some wehops from the d and d time poind and fornrimes like some gun swonrds one was red and bule one with a fox on it and other one with blacke and yellow one it with some danondgrsonit. a calw like shind and some others wehoples too,
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