Reviews for Second Steps
RocketScientist2 chapter 14 . 5/13/2008
I was very surprised by your bio to have you say you cannot write. Follow the evidence girl! Wonderful story, characterizations very in keeping and never dull, good pace. I just re-read the whole story now it is complete. And I detect a high emotinal intelligenc - your analysis of Heather and her statements to Grissom were right on the money and I had not thought of those explanations.I really think that is what was/is the real understanding they have. I also was just going, "yes,yes, that explains everything about Grissom's behaviour over the years" when you had him reveal about a fiancee from his early 20;s who died. That is TOTALLY in character - it would explain his fear of getting so close to someone only to loose them - especially if Grissom feared that his age did not give him a chance with her. Grissom is shown as someone who does not fall easily but falls completely when he does. It would also totally explain how in the show Sara forgives him and excepted a relationship with him after all the push and pull. I reconn that has to be the case. Hope CBS are watching.

Thank you.
toothchick chapter 14 . 5/12/2008
Thanks for a terrific GSR fic! Sorry to see it end!

Yea, Geekbaby!
Coldtrain chapter 14 . 5/12/2008
Thanks for sharing :) it was great!
My Kate chapter 14 . 5/12/2008
happiness reigns!...absolutely perfect ending with their mind meld revealing Sara's message without words...clever ending to this amazing story...I'll look forward to your next work...thanks for this one!...
ishotsherlock chapter 14 . 5/12/2008
that was a great beautiful story. the last line had me choking on my drink, laughing, it was such a Grissom thing to say.

AKE:D

PS: never know whether to point out mistakes or not cause it seems a bit rude (and i did it once and the auther had a go at me).
CJS-DEPPendent chapter 14 . 5/12/2008
Oh! It's over! :(

Great ending though! I'm always for geek-baby endings :)

And thanks for the special mention :P

I really look forward to reading more of your stries, you did a really great job on this one!

CJS-DEPPendent

PS: Good luck on those exams! ;)
ishotsherlock chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
that explains alot about Grissom and why it took him so long to be with Sara.

cant wait to read more.

AKE:D
gayarm-agron chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
aw they are so sweet! Good one about the old girlfriend...

plz update soon :P
My Kate chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
oh my goodness...had me tearfully reading near the end of this excellent chapter...sigh...these two...such hurtfilled pasts...finding each other...but...is their new alliance strong enough to weather the storms ahead?...please update soon...
My Kate chapter 12 . 4/30/2008
I am SO good with a universe that holds her "ditto"...sigh...thanks for helping Gil prove he is not just another runofthemill schmuck...hat's off to you, this was a profoundly enjoyable chapter...looking forward to "what's next"...
Coldtrain chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
Aw this is cute ! Really :) I can't wait to read more !
CJS-DEPPendent chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
Oh! That's sweet...and kinda sad too ...

Since in the show we never get any background on the characters (except catherine) we never know much about them, but I do think there has to be something in Gil's past to make him as withdrawn as he is...

Anyway, post again soon,

CJS-DEPPendent
toothchick chapter 13 . 4/30/2008
Gil is so sweet & loving!
shiva chapter 12 . 4/29/2008
Hi I just want to say thanks for making things right in my little world of GSR. I really liked the way you started First Steps and actually felt sad when I thought you were going for angst to many writers on this page seem to make the GSR relationship really hard. I know following the T. they went through some tough times but I figure Sara is a lot stronger than she sometimes seems. I need to see them happy in my little world so thanks!

shiva
Coldtrain chapter 12 . 4/29/2008
Aww Poor Sara. I love this ! Keep going!
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