Reviews for Born Of a Sith Lord
Fainfan chapter 2 . 6/14
What happened to your grammar man? The first chapter was good. But suddenly it became like a pre schooler standard of Speaking
Fainfan chapter 1 . 6/14
Captain Darklighter chapter 1 . 5/9
good idea and it's a good story, but the grammar and spelling mistakes make it almost unreadable
Crow chapter 2 . 4/24
hey man the premise of the story is awesome, but the spelling and broken English was just to much for me to read it could be an awesome story if you went over it and fixed the mistakes
Guest chapter 3 . 4/15
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
Sidious did escape his death in the death star, we'll of u follow the EU he did
Deaenu123 chapter 2 . 3/15
so last chap you jumped around his age from 4 to just pre chunin the to 8 if the 4 yrs ago but was anything

Good story spelling is a little seems to be missing and some words need to be changed out
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23
Really hinata
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 1/11
Very good first chapter.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/3
I love this story!
Ryu Master of Seals chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
Oh God seriously? Revan? Make his own name.
TheViewer chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
Great story so far but the grammer is shit
draco122 chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
that was freaking awesome
Guest chapter 10 . 1/20/2015
Better gramgrammar
KingKiger chapter 3 . 1/8/2015
I got to say story is great, but the quality of dialog from chapter 1 to chapter 2 and 3 dropped a hell of a lot, chapter 1 was well written chapter 2 was decent and just the first part of 3 alone was horrendous in grammar. I will continue to read this story, but please I implore you to go back and fix the grammar mistakes.
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