Reviews for Fourteen
Nitedream chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Auroura chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Nice and creepy. As said before, Riku is 15, though. Also, you might want to change the character tag from "Ansem the Wise/DiZ" to "Ansem/Xehanort's Heartless".
Draco's Worst Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Great story! Just awesome. I love these dark fics with the recurring sentence. The only thing that made me twitch was that Riku was 15 when the whole thing started. Sora was 14. I thought it was going to be over a certain period of time or something, but it just stuck with the 14 thing. No offense. Just stating facts here. Otherwise, I loved it. :)
My Chemical Music Box chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
This is really good.

It's really powerful and... surreal? There's a word I want but even I don't know what it is! XD

But I loved the recurring sentence: "Riku was 14..." Yeah.

Keep up the good work!
SLYSWN chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I enjoyed it!
Karise-Paisley92005 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Huh, I never thought about Riku this way before. Well written as usual :) Good Job :)
justgonenow chapter 1 . 4/5/2008

I love you even more :'D

Ansem/riku is one of my guilty pairing pleasures :'D and you just made me squirm in happiness xD

definately worth a favorite!

and you're definately one of my favorite authors now xD
13loves8loves9loves6 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
o dode this was col w pooe Riku~ i like how it ended with the little one line things~