Reviews for The Foreign Hottie
Guest chapter 21 . 3/3
You said you’ll write soon... ITS BEEN 8 YEARSSSSS
Catherine chapter 18 . 11/28/2017
GOD ALEX DONT YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT HAMSTERS!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2017
Love it
Guest chapter 5 . 8/6/2017
sex might come later
Soomanyfanfics chapter 21 . 12/28/2016
Plz continue updating! I love your story!
MELIS chapter 21 . 10/10/2016
please update this is awesome and very good!
Hashtagger0952 chapter 21 . 8/22/2016
Oh my Geesh! Typical fangirl in THE HOUSE. LOL. At first, I thought this was just another clichéd love story...but NO! it was a-romance-packed L-O-V-E-S-T-O-R-Y. It got me crying so hard (in my heart, mind you xD) Edward was soo sweet and chessy towards Bella, I mean, who does not want their hands to be held by THE FOREIGN HAWTIEE? If it were me, I'd swooning like every other girls. He's like the type of guy that every girl wants- I mean, he gotall nervous when he confessed his "undying love" to Bella, he was very sweet when he asked her to dance and plus, he got all protective of his "girlfriend" when those sophomores made fun of her. He was like, if you hurt her in any way, shape or form, you'd wished you were day, I for one want someone like that- all uncaring at first but VERY PROTECTIVE when someone lays a finger on you. Anywayzz, in my opinion, you portrayed my taste lol, and I think this story would suck if you don't continue it (get the hint get the hint) aww pwease pwease pwease update because I heart this story ;) Much love, your very annoying little reader. Thx
Guest chapter 21 . 12/21/2015
This was great I decide to make a sequel
sushmitha chapter 21 . 10/7/2015
R u going to update next chapter
Caribbeanvamp chapter 21 . 9/4/2015
Ok no lie here but I loved it and I knw ur about 19 years old now but thats it! SERIOUSLY! What no alex or whatever his name is stalking her and Edward beating the crap out of him!,No edward deciding to stay after spring or whichever season he's leaving , No Happily ever after ! Not even (As I watched Edward sleep that night I heard him whisper I love u bella and with that I kissed him and went to sleep) NOT EVEN THAT ! NOT RIGHT U SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE SOME MORE
Rhonda chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
I don't think I'll read any more of it I've read enough what got me was U didn't say ( Thank God U said Thank Gosh) And the only time U used God name was using it in VAIN. So U probably have pleanty of readers already U don't need me.
Kate Snape21 chapter 21 . 7/21/2015
please update soon i really love this story it is amazing :) i didn't want to stop reading
Anonymous chapter 21 . 7/6/2015
OMG! update! I have been waiting for months for you to post a new chapter, and then I see you haven't updated for five years! What is going on!
Edward Bella chapter 21 . 5/10/2015
I rlly like it... When r u gonna post another chapter tho
Rose chapter 4 . 1/31/2015
I am twilight obsessed. seriously this is so awesome! I cant stop reading :) thank you so much for this new story :) I was always sad that jacob was left out, it makes me really happy that he is included and brings them together :))
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