Reviews for The Monster in the Mirror
Sparkling Fangs96 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008

This is completely truthful to the statements he makes in all the books.

You totally captured the essence of Edward's self hate in 108 words.


Ellie is a freak name chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Very good, very moving.

Edward is so contradicted.

The internal debate is a wonderful poem plot line.
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Thats so cool you can write poems to :) i wrote a poem about cats once LOL its started with "Nudge, Nudge, Purr, Purr, They rub against my leg"I cant remember the rest though LOL I have in my closet though :)
Belle95 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
That's a great peom. It's sad though. I like it alot...Belle
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I reached my maximum pms for the day...thats sad,but i found away around it!:


I hope everything gets better! Try to tough it out. And I really hope bell is ok!

I have a friend like that and then they expect you to be totally okay with it, and they will get all pissy at you in the middle of a public place. ARG! Only thing I can tell you is try to get her to understand its not ok, I use to always let people push me around and one day I snapped and said look if you act like this I cant be your friend! And it worked just like that she now knows how far she can push me before I snap.

Right now my city is being evacuated from the flood, which has gotten SUPER bad a lot of my friends are out of state staying with relatives….
AllisonIsAllison chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Oh poor Edward! Very good poem though.
FreakyTwilightLoverO.O chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
check some spelling

loved it.
dietmountainlion123 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
aw. poor edward!

i can really imagine him saying

like that!
singer154 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008

that was good.

Poor Edward, so contradicted, so pulled in so many directions.

And yet, there is only one direction for Bella, whatever path Edward is on.

I loved the poem.