Reviews for The Monster in the Mirror
Sparkling Fangs96 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
OMG

This is completely truthful to the statements he makes in all the books.

You totally captured the essence of Edward's self hate in 108 words.

Bravo

Amazing
Ellie is a freak name chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Very good, very moving.

Edward is so contradicted.

The internal debate is a wonderful poem plot line.
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Thats so cool you can write poems to :) i wrote a poem about cats once LOL its started with "Nudge, Nudge, Purr, Purr, They rub against my leg"I cant remember the rest though LOL I have in my closet though :)
Belle95 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
That's a great peom. It's sad though. I like it alot...Belle
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I reached my maximum pms for the day...thats sad,but i found away around it!:

:(

I hope everything gets better! Try to tough it out. And I really hope bell is ok!

I have a friend like that and then they expect you to be totally okay with it, and they will get all pissy at you in the middle of a public place. ARG! Only thing I can tell you is try to get her to understand its not ok, I use to always let people push me around and one day I snapped and said look if you act like this I cant be your friend! And it worked just like that she now knows how far she can push me before I snap.

Right now my city is being evacuated from the flood, which has gotten SUPER bad a lot of my friends are out of state staying with relatives….
AllisonIsAllison chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Oh poor Edward! Very good poem though.
FreakyTwilightLoverO.O chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
check some spelling

loved it.
dietmountainlion123 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
aw. poor edward!

i can really imagine him saying

like that!
singer154 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Aww...

that was good.

Poor Edward, so contradicted, so pulled in so many directions.

And yet, there is only one direction for Bella, whatever path Edward is on.

I loved the poem.

XO

Annie