Reviews for Cynic
emily xxx chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
ok, but needs a proper ending. They should kiss or something...
ultranaff chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
seriously. amazing.
fledge chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
So it's Dennis Peter Pan? A very fine approach indeed.

“Think we’re too old for it?” Minnie asked him, suddenly.

“Yeah,” he replied. “Smoking’s for idiots.”

About sums it all up, doesn't it? (Even if you didn#t have to point out about the misunderstanding - everybody with half a mind will know what you mean.)

Tragic, really, that even that graffiti stunt has to be done on an EMPTY schoolhouse. A bit mean, though that you don't give us an idea of that Limerick!

What will be next? Calvin at college? Charlie Brown in the army?