Reviews for the shinikage
firelordeg chapter 3 . 2/18/2009
I beg you go back to the three way relation ship of Hinata, naruto, and Sakura please also add Rukia please update again a.s.a.l.a.
Shadow65 chapter 3 . 2/18/2009
please update soon
Pjokstr chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
i find it slightly funny that your rating is M but yoiu don't actually cuss in your fic. Also you need a beta cause there are a lot of small mistakes
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 3 . 1/29/2009
Update soon
Evenos Cross chapter 3 . 4/25/2008
Nice Fic I like it so far...Grimm's Bloodline could be something like Kimimaro's or Haku's well cya update soon
Uncle Schrodinger chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
someone is about to be in pain.
LonewolfBloodstorm chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
aw why you gotta tease a hinata sakura naruto relashinship then take it away, i like that idea, the two closet people to actully getting naruto, i think they both fit him
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.
Narutodrg chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Nice story so far update soon and have Yugito paired withNaruto PLEASE!
Yojimbra chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
nice start for naruto bleach cross over can't wait for the second of what i hope to be many chapters
spazzgirl chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
well first things first

it's not a bad start

there were some spelling, punctuation, and grammatical error

when you have the characters speak, you have to capitalize the first word like

"excuse me" should be "Excuse me"

when the characters are done talking making sure you end with the quotation marks for example:

"excues me but who are you naruto asked he looked up and replied, should be "Excuse me, but who are you?" Naruto asked as he looked up and replied.

that's all i have to say