Reviews for Umbra
ThePurpleRose chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This is fantastically written and a great concept. I love it. _
LucidRainDrops chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Ummn... it's not done is it? are there going to be more chapters or are you gonna just end it like... right there? I can't say it's very good if it did end but um otherwise your grammar is used really well.
Key of Ra chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Huh, I read one YuanRain pairing and I see them everywhere now. *shrugs* Oh well. I wanted to say that I really liked the feel of this fic and I'd be interested in reading a follow-up. Yuan is a very interesting character.
CWolf2 chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
You have a rich vocabulary, a rarity here. I also love how you portrayed the characters in the story. I thought they were very much in character. Overall this was great, all in present tense too! Wonderful work!
Captain Luludee chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Wow, that was really interesting. I love the depth you've given Yuan, he's one of my favorite characters. Your story really made me look at him in a new light. I'm sure that if he was real this is very close to how he would perceive himself. Bottom line is, I enjoyed reading this!

-The Captain
freakyanimegal chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Yeah! Yaine! Me love! n.n