Reviews for Blood Bath
SakuraHatake1 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
That was relly good i cant belive u said u coulnt write lemons
ol2bob chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
oh... payback isn't so fun, is it? i like how he teased her at the end.. heheh... and i'm very glad you agree with the list on my profile.. consider it my only contribution to fanfiction
twilight 365 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
please. please write a lemon.
SaliorMoon chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Do Edwards pov

so so good!
musicalEdward chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
awesome story! very steamy. do i even want to know what the lemon is used for?LOL!
edwardcullansbuffy chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
please please please please do the wedding and some lemoney goodness
Jordan E chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
my my aren't we a naughty little girl, but i loved it! u HAVE to do it from Edward's point of view, it would be hilarious!
not-addicted chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
i think that you did a really good job. i like fanfics that keep true to the characters. good job.
Dani chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
so good,

Can you do this in EPOV?

i think it will be really good!
jenny chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
loved it!:P

it was really well done...

do the wedding...please:D
lunargirl317 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
good chapter! i really like it. ]
Socialxxhazard chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I really liked how her was scared for her then..the whole towel scene at the end.

am I making sense? lol

please keep writing!
JonnysGurl chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Write the Lemon!
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