Reviews for Undefined
Guest chapter 3 . 9/1/2014
Aaaw, sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Mmmm, you've got my attention. I hope i finish this fic.
jj chapter 10 . 12/22/2013
I like this but I dought my relationship will turn out as sweet im a lot like iruka and the person im with is sorta like kakashi in this but there name is like everyone elses to me :( oh well I love the story thanks
jj chapter 5 . 12/21/2013
i love the fact that Gai had a relationship, I see very fewpeople who can pull that off very nicly in a fic but the bref mention in this is good. also I'm in a similar relationship to this right now only I find myself in irukas position and not sure what to do hope the fic will help :p
Cardboard Bike chapter 10 . 3/31/2013
I assumed I already reviewed because I usually do, particularly when I favourite, but it looks like I haven't... my apologies (though I guess it's a rather old story). I come back and read this story every so often, because the interactions between characters intrigue me (I also love your portrayal of Anko, particularly).

I love this story for its complexities, its pain, and its brutal truth; it's engaging and far from the usual cliche Kakairu stories. The characters have depth and are beautifully rendered in imperfectness, which gives them an edge of believability (I loved Iruka waking Kakashi up and Kakashi not being head over heels about it). My mind keeps pulling me back to the mention of 'gray' and how this whole story is in a gray area - there is no right or wrong answer, yet Iruka still has to choose. It's something a lot of fanfiction romance overlooks, I think (even the good ones) - it is never just a choice between 'I love you' and 'I don't love you', because human emotions are never that simple.
mizscha chapter 9 . 12/23/2012
i like the pace of this story, not too fast not too slow, just at the right pace. i like how they are discussing their feelings and things in adult-way. i think many caught in this kind of situation where the other person love you and you like them but not like as in love. and iruka is willing to give kakashi chance and see how far they could go(and we know at the end they will end up together). that's admirable, you know. because i don't think i can ever do that. i'm just not that kind-hearted enough. well just sharing bit of opinion. i like this story. because it's rare reading something not quite typical, and just the way i like it.
jka1 chapter 10 . 1/26/2012
I thought this was a great story, the ending was nice and I loved how in love Kakashi was with Iruka, great job -
YaoiAttraction chapter 10 . 12/23/2011
Hmm...strange ending, but a fairly good story.

YaoiAttraction chapter 9 . 12/23/2011
Ooooooh smexxxxxx!
YaoiAttraction chapter 8 . 12/23/2011
This rocks ok. I hate some parts in a selfish way, but Its a wonderful story.
YaoiAttraction chapter 7 . 12/23/2011
Poor Kakashi. He's so love-sicked he'll even risk hurting himself for Iruka. Awww how sweet is that!
YaoiAttraction chapter 6 . 12/23/2011
Ooooh someones falling in looooove![tease] Lol or at least I think! XD
YaoiAttraction chapter 5 . 12/23/2011
Loved it! Well at least Kakashi is trying to cope with his feelings. XD

Good 0 Job-
YaoiAttraction chapter 4 . 12/23/2011
I think that Iru is slowly gaining feelings for Kakashi if not just friendship feelings. Though he may not realize it until a specific time.
YaoiAttraction chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
Hmph...Iru is kind of in a dramatic situation. Knowing that your hurting some-one when their in love with you is kind of serious! Lol it's not nice to play with others emotions, but Iru isnt. He already told Kakashi he doesn't return the feelings.

XD Greeeeeat!
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