|Reviews for Edge of Reason|
| sammispn226 chapter 2 . 3/6/2009
This is great! Please update soon!
I think you really thought out the characters very well, and how they would act in these situations, etc etc.
I just have one criticism: you're missing hyphens in your compound adjectives. There were a couple missing in the first chapter, and two in the second: "narrow-eyed determination and brain-numbing tenacity."
Besides that, you're doing great! I love your story, please keep writing!
| vikkaayBYAH chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
I like this drabble collection, too! Thanks for writing!
| sonia chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
I love the way you write... you are good with words... one of my favorites is your "Perfect in Weakness" story...( I read it everynow & then) and these drabbles are very good too. Please continue, don't stop.
I love SasuSaku stories a lot, so write more about them.
| Broken-Hearts-of-Angels chapter 2 . 9/17/2008
This little drabble of Sasusaku is awesome! it definitely isn't as fluffy as a lot of other drabble stories I've read in the past, but it sure as hell still keeps my attention span just as much, if not more. It's simply amazing. Continue to update, but take your time. I never would forcibly make anyone rush their work. quality wins over quantity, right?
| Anon chapter 2 . 8/16/2008
Good quality SakuSasu. Nicely done.
| Kane Shi Megami chapter 2 . 8/4/2008
(and not because he was on the ground struggling to breathe.) Denial is a wonderful thing Sasuke. I know it had everything to do with that. XD
| Kane Shi Megami chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Oh I was so scared I wasn't going to be able to review this because I'm damn sure I've read it multiple times :). VERY GOOD WORK. I hate reading stories about Sakura throwing herself at his feet and this one was perfect characterization of Sasuke and Sakura. XD I can't wait to read more.
| ixr chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
I really enjoyed this chapter. There's so much tension between the two of them, exactly as I would expect there to be after such a long time has passed since they've been together.
I'm really sorry to hear you're not continuing this as a story. I feel like there's so much potential in this. Reconsider?
Haha. Great job.
| Neon Genesis chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Sasuke is very realistic and in character for this, me thinks. You have a beautiful writing style and a way with words. Update soon, please!
| Soniya Himoura chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
its seems like a good story to be. i would wish and pray for u to make it such, but i do not want to be a begger.. but yeah its really good. and if u wanna make it somthign more...i'm chearing u on. lol
| Aya8 chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
This was amazing! Please update! Please! I'm now reading three of your stories all incomplete, all fabulous, and all killing me with anticipation! Please!
| Mystikwriter chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
very nice. I love the way his mind work. you really pegged him in this story.
| graviola chapter 2 . 5/26/2008
Oh Sasuke's pov, I really like how you write. Its steady and coherent with the caracther. The emotions are there,not too much or too little. Just the right amount.
But I was kind of expecting you to go at least until he went to talk with Sakura.
And I'm beyond gratefull that his thoughts didn't include just how awesome hot she was.
But my favorite still is the 'everything'its very fitting of his personality.
So I'm expecting more!Yeah!All reviews need to end with : UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!
| Destiny1029 chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
I love it, its the awkwardness that a true person would feel in that situation, although, I'm not sure how many cases of a michael jackson type predator taking a 13 year old kid, training him to kill his brother, and 2 friends going off on a journey to get him back there are... not sure there's many cases of that. haha
Anyway wonderful! I love the Sasu/Saku interaction. Can't wait to read more, all of your works are fantastic!
| cutecrazyice chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
Nice! The two can be connected, actually, but if you read them separately, they're pretty good as well. :)