|Reviews for beautiful mess inside|
| Three Moons chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
| roantimothy chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I am so glad I put you in my author favorites, wouldn't want to have missed this tidbit of Ziva and Tony. Love the banter, light but deeply felt, LOVED his suggesting the sleeping with a co worker, SO Tony and Ziva is VERY well written
Thanks for your work
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Ah, those unsaid words. They can haunt you forever.
Darned good story. Very touching. At least it touched me.
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
| Ziva4Tony chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Wonderful story, this is something I could see happening.
| LadyRynofSunnydale chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Really nice! Good job with Tony and Ziva's character, but Tony's dialogue seems just a little too childish for Season 5, a little more Season 3 and beginning of Season 4. Besides that though, really nice job. Ziva's character you nailed perfectly, as well as Gibbs's. I love that Tony came and picked her up and brought her to the airport though. That is totally a Season 5 Tony there. I hope you continue!
| Lattelady chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Very well written. My favorite line was: Her father cannot do this to her. He cannot just die without any warning. It’s… selfish.
That's the way most of us feel about sudden death of a loved one.
I was really hoping there would be more chapters coming to this story. Any chance for a sequel?
| Cable Addict chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Great story Cath!
| Kit chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Lovely. Really, really nice in both Ziva's internal movements, and the Tony/Ziva interraction. I would *really* like to meet/get to know a bit more about her father (and her whole family really) in canon.
I especially liked Tony's teasing about the 'sixteen year old running around in underwear' thing, and also the 'don't feel ashamed if you need to sleep with a co-worker to make yourself feel better' thing. And Gibbs' non-reaction-reaction. Because he *respects* her. So he'd just let her do her thing, and then send Tony to check up on her.
As always, beautifully IC, and a wonderful read. Much enjoyed.