Reviews for Very Bad Things |
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![]() ![]() I am crying uncontrollably at the last line it's so beautiful and it breaks my heart into millions of sharp little pieces because of the war references and Sirius talking about things that dumbledore has said to them and I can completely see how the plot will follow canon in terms of how short their lives are, this is written so beautifully and I got a sense of significance and bittersweetness And I am sorry about the mushiness and nonsensical review but marauders make me so emotional haha. This is probably my favourite lupin/Sirius fic I can't express my love for the way you have written and how moved I was by your story. Xxxxxxxxx Cindy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this through a rec on tumblr, but I absolutely can't wait to read the rest of your work. This was brilliantly witty and funny and heartbreaking and identical in practically every way to the Remus and Sirius in my mind. This is definitely one of my new favorite Remus/Sirius fics, and altogether an excellent use of my day. Keep up your awesomeness :) |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwww, that was the sweetest. I really enjoyed reading it. I have to admit, however, that I did get a little confused with the point of views. Other than that, the story line was spectacular, the writing was pretty damn great, and I may have been brought to tears at a few places. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() That was the sweetest chapter ever. You did a wonderful job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazinggggg :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. It made me laugh so hard at points, especially in this last chapter. Like when Sirius said to James, "You're the kid who almost got expelled." Siriusly, that was hilarious. You did an awesome, awesome job on this! ~writergal24 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely amazing! I laughed myself silly, but it wasn't only about humour, you managed to insert quite a bit of emotion too. You really are a remarkably gifted writer. Thank you! Cheers! Sarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for writing such a brilliant and touching and magnificent story. I read this every night and it amazes me that at the end of each chapter I get this warm overwhelming feeling that for a moment, everything is perfect. The way you write these characters is beautiful and I appreciate so much the way you portray this sense of equality between them with Sirius being slightly dominant but Remus giving just enough and Sirius being so open and fragile and Remus being his steady source of comfort. Every chapter was just perfect. Thank you again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, you are an excellent writer. :) PLEASE tell me you have considered continuing this? If not, I understand, but you must know that this was a wonderful ending and a fantastic read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing:D Your Sirius and Remus are now one of my favourite couples! thanks for a great read:) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() i absolutely adored this! you have turned me into a remus/sirius shipper! fantastic job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, good job, can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I think you've done this very well. You managed to keep it relatively realistic, captivating and just overall a great and fun read. I liked that you kept Peter and James' reaction to the relationship real. There was no random screaming and crack, and there wasn't any overreacting either. Everyone reacts differently to their friend coming out to them (mine was an ever so delicate:...so?), but I think you did a great job on both of these character's responses to the sudden news. Keep up the great work! I really enjoyed reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh holy jesus-fucking-christ! That was a rollercoaster! That last chapter was so...bittersweet! And the story as a whole? I was in stitches, i'm sure my housemates all think i'm insane now...well, more insane than normal. It was hilarious, and so very, very real! I feel sad now, sad thats its over and it made me miss my own friends, so now i will have to organise a massive get together. :) Thank you so much for writing this, I honestly cannot praise it enough. Except maybe that Flamingo-Mango thing! I am still giggling like a nutter. :D Thanks again, Kimmimaru. XXX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story added to C2: Harry Potter Multi-Chapter Stories Oh. My. God. This was amazing! It was hilarious in parts, it had the Marauder dynamic down perfectly, and then there was the wonderful-ness that is Remus/Sirius. I really don't know how to review something so awesome, just that I am so glad that this became a fifteen-chapter story as opposed to a one-shot. Wonderful, wonderful job. |