Reviews for Very Bad Things |
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![]() ![]() Oh my gosh-I just found your story tonight, and it is absolutely brilliant. I love how you portray the uncertainty between Remus and Sirius. Your turns of phrase and metaphors and dialogue are incredible! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. Sirius really didn't make a smart move with the whole "not caring about the lipstick" thing, didn't he now? Oh well, we all make mistakes. Great chapter! ~lollipop |
![]() ![]() ![]() That title was really...saddening. Yay for James for being so grown-up; it almost makes up for the fact that they're dictating First-years. Is that why Peter has a scepter, by the way? Can't wait for what's next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee, I like it! I can't wait til the full update, but that was really good. Totally the wake-up call Sirius needed! ~lollipop |
![]() ![]() ![]() kinda feel bed for Sirius...though he was a bit of a prat! lol loving the story...its really well written and i await anxiously for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are torturing us. But I like it! I'm waiting for that real, full-length update... SOON! :) Hearts, Jane Buz-Jane |
![]() ![]() I really like it! I have only read the first paragraph and now I have it bookmarked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no why are you making them unhappy? why? T.T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh is right. Very intressting chapter. Can't wait for the next chappie... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sweet. That's just what Remus' reaction should have been earlier on. Ah, Sirius, you're in love. I wonder what Remus thinks about the whole Angela thing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice interlude; good to see Sirius finally realising - albeit subconciously - that he loves Remus. I'm looking forward to the next full chapter, where hopefully the puppies will make up again. I suppose, if you believe it necessary for the plot, one more chapter of them both pining and contemplating their feelings would be okay, but it annoys me when authors drag out the drama for too long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evil, thy name is violet gallagher! Do you realise how I jump for joy when I see an update for this story and then to get a tiny snippet which doesn't come close to satisfying my desperate need for these two to get it on...? Unspeakably cruel! Having voiced my distaste for short chapters, I loved Sirius' dream version of 'what should have happened' and his stunning stupidity finally coming to an end as he realises that yes, he is an absolute powder puff and yes, he is wildly in love with a sexy werewolf. Wonderfully written yet again. Very sweet and so simple but Sirius said everything he needed to in just two little words (not even words, really). Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! this chapter was great! I love Sirius dreams this last chapters were really awesome and I completely loved chapter 3! I can't wait to see how Sirius is going to act after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that is worrying... ANyway, I love this story. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot for you! it was amazing, your writing is amazing! More SOON! Please! |